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mash the competition with raucous visions
the obnoxious villain dropping hottness... friction
with a dauntless wisdom i fight for victory
instantly hitting these emcees in my written history
this is heat reached from the depts of the mind
kept in confines til the chains are swept from the signs
pressed in lines refined and flowed outwardly
peoples doubt in me soundly crushed in sounds of frees
i count the trees leafs in the breeze shooting the wind
as im losing to sin and convoluted ideas again
cruising to win, but sometimes tha taste is bitter sweet
in a shift of weeks i hit my peak but the pictures cheap
i figure deeds whether good or bad are righteous
in a cypha i feel the words enter like it nitrous
so i might just face the world with nothing to lose
adjusting my dues and try not to rush in confused
its something to do to feel my full potential
concealed with in a pencil with the illest credentials
being sentimental aint never really got me shit
stop me quick nah not possible as i drop this shit
cops be stiff trying to lock me up but i cant b contain
as i refrain the pain in my brain and break all restraints

nice drop yo..

Nice drop. Good emontion.

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Cool read...
Topic was cool, Could have upped the Vocab but it wasn't really an issue cuz you got the point out smoothly. Content was cool
Flow was dope and on point except 1 part
it could just be me though

peoples doubt in me soundly crushed in sounds of frees
i count the trees leafs in the breeze shooting the wind
as im losing to sin and convoluted ideas again

Idk just those 3 lines seem off flow from the rest of the piece..(Although the top line in quote seems like it flows but the rhyme is forced... sound of freeze? or frees? -- either way seems forced)... other than that


dope drop and keep doing you, ill be lookin for more piece

nice drop multis on point
and the flow was there killed it with the
vocab too

This Was Solid


Flow Was On Point.. You Had Multies Here And There Made It Good.. I Think If You Shorten'd Some Bars Ah' Lil It'll Sound Beast On Ah' Track



Keep Doin Ya Thang Bro


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