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s3v3nth1rty vs splashking (730 wins 5-3)

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s3v3nth1rty vs splashking (730 wins 5-3)

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5 bars. House rules
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-- Fri May 27, 2011 9:39 pm --
im about to make the earth shake when this cat crash
i aint talking about chewing gum when i say im finna jigg you with a trident splash
you see im like posiedon causin murderous explosions in oceans
you could drop your verse in a puddle and nobody would see any-motion//

faggit you aint a king, im royalty and you just a peasant
you cant compare, your whole swag isnt current its second hand, used like crack resin
so its off with kings head cause ya coofs finna get smashed in fool
only time you waS ever a splashking was when you were the fattest kid jumpin in the pool//

so go back to the minor leagues kid this is illest lyrics
i didnt wanna be the one to do this but i have to crush your spirits
better warn ya fams cause when i bum rush ya pad with a SKs in hand
when im done with splash the coroner use a mop n bucket, cant put spilled water in a body bag//

bitch you annoyin like that sound a leaky faucet maKes
s3v3nth1rty the plumber here to expose ya fake drops n wash splash down the drain
splash is equivalent to a rain drop, my flows like a water main broke
your spits aint fire they just luke warm, ya name alone shows my ice cold flow leaves splash froze//

demo k.o'd you, an example that ya drops look like you took a kids poem n copy n pasted
steppin to s3v3n you nervous, cause you already know when my diss dispurses splash gets evaporated
splashking as a name is exagerated, lyricaly this fag gettin mind fucked
so im finna joox splash right fast and illest will watch this spill get wiped up n tossed in the dump//
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Re: s3v3nth1rty vs splashking

Post by Blake Downs »

go ahead try and get with this ish,i will rip ya limbs
im doper than xanax witness this,plus you got more greasy bars than any fitness gyms


fatality mentality this annihilation will finish him,
if my dicks the ocean,than thats why your moms always finna swim


i have sex with the stars,you get stressed by my car
now i hit ya head wit jars,and leave you more stretched than ya bars



leave you in the hospital,temporarily disabled,and my tempers barely enabled
i submerge you to embers,thatll leave you laid out like a table,


Now remember,im like "The Rock" you baby back bitch i can drop your cradle,
im bigger than "Kane" and Able,"So Suck It!'you more of a bitch than "Sable"
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Re: s3v3nth1rty vs splashking

Post by Alvin »

First off, 730... Why'd you over write? you are aware that you did so right? You had some filler bars to be honest, but some of them were actually quite funny. I was going to be a dick on your verse and vote against you cuz you lack the ability to follow your own rules, but your opponent did one step further that equalled both penalties out. Not a bad drop at all man, you came with name flips, some punches, but only big gripe i have is the flow, rather rough in a lot of patches.


Splash, not only do you use or try to use multiple accounts, but you recycle material. I just came from reading the you vs. beur battle, and this popped out to me.
That battle:
SplashKing wrote:Moms body more stretched out than Buer's Bars
this Battle:
and leave you more stretched than ya bars
Not only is the content played, but its also recycling which is against the rules. Your opponent messed up too, so IMO we can continue the voting, as in both of you are equally incappable of following rules. As for your verse, this doesnt make sense, not only on a common sense level, but grammatical level:
fatality mentality
Other than that, you had some decent stuff, but none of it seemed aim at 730.


MVGT 730.
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Re: s3v3nth1rty vs splashking

Post by Jsteel »

Flow:splash punches:seven nameflipz:seven enjoyment:seven wordplay:seven mvgt seven,decent batle tho

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Post by Grim »

IMO i have to go with splash cause he wrtoe an appropriate amount of bars and If i count an even amount of bars then 7:30's first 5 bars are not as solid as Splash's...this battle is kind of messed up nut overall
MVGT: SPLASH (if recycling accurred I don't know what to think
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Jsteels vote does not count. Anyone willing to go against this calling can do so here: http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/money ... 22368.html


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Post by thadevious1 »

lol I have to vote for splash
overall he had a tighter structure
and his punches were hitting much harder

vote = splash
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Re: s3v3nth1rty vs splashking

Post by Kurse »

-Punches- S3V3NTH1RTY
-Flow- SplashKING
-Personals- S3V3NTH1RTY
-Multies- Tie
-Enjoyment- Tie

My overall vote goes to S3V3NTH1RTY. Now I agree...his bars are far stretched and he went alot further in depth than he needed to...but his punches and multi's were very on point. He used a few personals...so he captured that category as well, but Splash did take flow due to his easier structure.

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Re: s3v3nth1rty vs splashking

Post by Tha Dark Prince »

Punches: splash had some clever ones though 730 came harder n went in on the name, 730 gets this

flow: splash was a more fluent read, outclassed his opponent in regards to structure, 730 tried shit but failed

personals: splash you know, none of your bars seemed directed at your opponent, 730's really make a difference in the battle with the name attacks

multies: both came sloppy here n there 730 had some attempts but i'mma give this a tie

enjoyment: 730 had some nice lines and dope nameflips, splash had some good bars too but for the feel and considering this was a battle, 730 edges this he came harder, attacked the name and really went in

MVGT: s3v3nth1rty

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Post by Enlightend »

ok i wasnt feeling sk's punches they were either played out lame or just seemed random as hell... and that made for a very dull read...


730 ya bars were st...re....tc...hed out... wich is ok if you have the rhyme scheme to back it up... but you dont... but you had some lyrical content so thats a plus...

mvgt 730 im not going to break this down further then its based on the fact he had some kind of direction
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Post by Arcane »

Flow:splash
punches:seven
enjoyment:seven
wordplay:seven

seven edged out in this for me.

mvgt: Seven
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Re: s3v3nth1rty vs splashking

Post by pest »

mvgt splash for the simple fact he followed rules...
i understand a streched bar or two but that was rediculas. that was like 12 fukkin bars if not more.... its easy to have more punches like that....

flow; splash
punches: 730
personals: 730
rule following; splash
enjoyment:splash

mvgt splash

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Re: s3v3nth1rty vs splashking

Post by Alvin »

730 had already won 5-3 ... But I guess I'm the only mod.

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