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furious stylings from maniacal villain,
chillin on the outside repping and spillin
a weapon im building written on a contract
full contact dropping like a bomb blast
im on that and been on it since the past
i synch the gap acting like the prince of rap
i rinse ya rats acting mink sleek but deep
repeat the speech wanting to seek a feast
the beast has breached now hes out an open
wit sounds thats golden hittin grounds thats frozen
crowned and glowin lit like phosphorus
with preposterous flows endlessly bottomless
try to follow it and end up left in the dust
wrecked in the muck and in debt wit tha bucks
im set on the cusp wit a tilt towards greatness
wit no patience im cutting off heads like haitians
high like Jamaicans but to fly to shed a wing
i fed on dreams til i was a rock like amphetamines
the reckoning reached from the tip of the iceberg
it twice heard than dropped and twice burned

Yo This Was Pretty sweet.. You Put Together Tha Vocab Pretty Well In My Opinion. Flow Was Nice.. Real Audio Like You Dig..

I Think If You Form'd Multies Ah' Lil Better.. Throw Some Metaphors And Punches Around.. You'd Be Beast.. Real Talk..


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upping this piece

Fuck it, flow was wild. Seemed like a fast pace rhythm that would make a dope audio piece, dunno how the multies would sounds spoken though since your vocab shines so hard. sick drop.

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Real nice flow you got there. I ain't one for slap talk and agressive rep, but I can't deny when it's done proper either. Keep it up!