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Now Be Smart Bitch,when your finished there'll be nothing left except this Sharks-Sense
Im KING OF POPs and shots so i automatically DARK PRINCE



My Cash-Boils-Seas,you straight-Pussy and you'd suck Fags Loyally
IllestLyrics,DarkPrince isnt worthy of SplashKings RAP-ROYALTY



Rap-Victory,you getting-in-this, is like saying a pennies-tremendous
your not getting-any-buisness,ok PRINCE,splashKINGS pullin more strings than Jimi-Hendrix,



When your brainless in the crate-gigglin,more fucked up than Obama after Eight-Ritalins..
Ya Prince-Faggit my Bars'll be fucking wit the PRINCE's head more than Kate-Middleton

I spit gas with a lit match, you'll catch, as I sit back, I rip kats n just laugh, you can 'splash' in ya blood bath!

this corny fag's story sad I spit 'gunz-of-cory fast'
you get killed on a 'track' like 'train' smash, brains mashed , remains wrapped in my wack-rapper body bag

...fool you ain't worthy...
If your death was a bitch I'd make her cum early!!
bet you got your name from being the daily 7:30 swirly!!?

You couldn't put a decent verse together if your pc had Pritt,
Maaan You're just the result of what happens when I take a shit..
(splish...splash...)


(flush)

peace

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Punches-tie , personals-prince , multies-splash , nameplay-tie , wordplay-none, entertainment-splash
Overall mvgt splash...decent battle both could've came harder though

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Now Be Smart Bitch,when your finished there'll be nothing left except this Sharks-Sense
Im KING OF POPs and shots so i automatically DARK PRINCE
dope[
My Cash-Boils-Seas,you straight-Pussy and you'd suck Fags Loyally
IllestLyrics,DarkPrince isnt worthy of SplashKings RAP-ROYALTY
cool
Rap-Victory,you getting-in-this, is like saying a pennies-tremendous
your not getting-any-buisness,ok PRINCE,splashKINGS pullin more strings than Jimi-Hendrix,
wordin ehhh .. but its ok
When your brainless in the crate-gigglin,more fucked up than Obama after Eight-Ritalins..
Ya Prince-Faggit my Bars'll be fucking wit the PRINCE's head more than Kate-Middleton
kool

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spit gas with a lit match, you'll catch, as I sit back, I rip kats n just laugh, you can 'splash' in ya blood bath!
weak open
this corny fag's story sad I spit 'gunz-of-cory fast'
you get killed on a 'track' like 'train' smash, brains mashed , remains wrapped in my wack-rapper body bag
dope wordplay, ehhh punch
...fool you ain't worthy...
If your death was a bitch I'd make her cum early!!
bet you got your name from being the daily 7:30 swirly!!?
again good wrdplay. cool
You couldn't put a decent verse together if your pc had Pritt,
Maaan You're just the result of what happens when I take a shit..
(splish...splash...)
cool


pretty close battle but 4 better consistancy vote goes to splashking

Punches-splash
Flow-Draw
Personals-Draw
Multies-splash
Enjoyment-splash
not a bad battle.both could step their game up a little....
MVGT Splashking

Punches- splash
Flow- tie
Multies- splash
Personal- draw
Enjoyment- splash

MVGT- Splash

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Well done splash

I would like the mod to leave his own opinion before this thread is closed

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I'm a mod, but the opinion that follows is just my own, it should not reflect on the other MODS or their status.


SPLASHKING-
Now Be Smart Bitch,when your finished there'll be nothing left except this Sharks-Sense
Im KING OF POPs and shots so I automatically DARK PRINCE
Eh, I like what you were intending to say, but the set up (1st line), I dont really see how a sharks sense ties in to anything, other than completing a double rhyme, which would make me think it's stretching. The flow was off a little bit as well.
My Cash-Boils-Seas,you straight-Pussy and you'd suck Fags Loyally
IllestLyrics,DarkPrince isnt worthy of SplashKings RAP-ROYALTY
LOL, how dare you spam another website in a battle lol. Set up boasting, with a nice tie in insult, as well as flow and wordplay with punch. I liked this one. Nothing great, but simple, to the point, and direct.
Rap-Victory,you getting-in-this, is like saying a pennies-tremendous
your not getting-any-buisness,ok PRINCE,splashKINGS pullin more strings than Jimi-Hendrix,
If the flow wasn't off so bad, this would be a pretty good bar, no real OH factor, but the rhyme scheme and nameplay added hype to the gereal self boasting punch.
When your brainless in the crate-gigglin,more fucked up than Obama after Eight-Ritalins..
Ya Prince-Faggit my Bars'll be fucking wit the PRINCE's head more than Kate-Middleton
I dont really like this, at all. I may be wrong, but Ritalin is used to treat ADD and narcolepsy, so in essence, it slows you down, numbs you. Taking 8 of those, I'd imagine you'd sleep a lot, or die. The opposite of what you were intending. You also started the set up with the word "when"... which leads me to wait for the what happens WHEN he's in the description you gave? Which you never answer. Kinda like; WHEN he's hungry... sunsets are awesome. Punch, eh...

Overall not bad, rhyme schemes are improving, set ups are ok, punches, well, developing, but the follow through is what i didnt like.


DARK PRINCE-
I spit gas with a lit match, you'll catch, as I sit back, I rip kats n just laugh, you can 'splash' in ya blood bath!
Well, first off, you show potential with the rhyme scheme. Also, after looking over the rest, if you canceled out the 2nd line, combining your first and 3rd as one bar, you might have been better off As thjis stands, I'd qualify it more of a line than a bar.
this corny fag's story sad I spit 'gunz-of-cory fast'
you get killed on a 'track' like 'train' smash, brains mashed , remains wrapped in my wack-rapper body bag
lol, althought the flow was off, the wordplay and punch were pretty good. The set up though, Is your name cory? Im having a problem connecting the Cory guns line.
...fool you ain't worthy...
If your death was a bitch I'd make her cum early!!
bet you got your name from being the daily 7:30 swirly!!?
"fool you aint worthy" <- nice narrative, not many people do that now a days. Other than Cory, which is interesting... Funny insult to the name, but ehh, barely feeling it. I am going to ask why 730? It reads weird, but maybe im reading to far into it.
You couldn't put a decent verse together if your pc had Pritt,
Maaan You're just the result of what happens when I take a shit..
(splish...splash...)
Lol, makes me laugh, although all in all, not so great. BTW, what the hell is Pritt? maybe that my disconnect...


All in all, other than some terrible flow, you're actually pretty good man, only advice i can give is think of some more complicated concepts. Not bad at all, i really dont think it should have been a land slide, but oh well. Next time i guess D.ouble P.enetration.