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3rd Party Picked Our Topic: The Guilt of A Crime
2:30-5:00 minute time limit
At least 2 verses & 1 hook
Due - WEDNESDAY 11:59 PM EAS

CATEGORIES TO VOTE ON:
-MULTIES-
-DELIVERY-
-HOOK-
-CREATIVITY-
-CONSISTENCY-
-FLOW-
-OTHER-

Any other rules you want to add just post them

guilt of a crime sounds good.

alright
we can go with guilt of crime

good luck

-- Wed May 25, 2011 10:46 am --

Guilt of A Crime
[soundclick]10682617[/soundclick]

here we go

[soundcloud]http://soundcloud.com/m33kish/fuck-is-wrong-with-me[/soundcloud]

CATEGORIES TO VOTE ON:
-MULTIES- m33
-DELIVERY- Mic S
-HOOK- Mic s
-CREATIVITY- m33
-CONSISTENCY- Mic S
-FLOW- m33


Hella close battle..mad props to both emcees..I jus thought Mic S was a lil more consitent and the hook was great...

mvgt: Mic S

good shit both of you..impressed

-MULTIES- M33kish (heard a few on here)
-DELIVERY- M33kish (delivery was on point I heard a lil slip ups nuthin' major u could barely notice it)
-HOOK- Mic S (I thought his hook was better but then M33kish's- M33kish sounded more of a freestyle 2 me)
-CREATIVITY- Both (both bless there beats wit nice creativity I felt like M33kish fast flow helped wit da beat he blessed)
-CONSISTENCY- M33kish
-FLOW- Both


Mic S
I liked urs & I feel like ur gettin' better on da recordin' tip. Presence is gettin' better keep recordin' it will only get better if u keep droppin' songs & find ur style on da mic. I did notice sum slips but dats normal eventually those will go away. Dis song is better then da last 1 I heard dats 4 sho tho. Topic wise I think u did a good job u stayed on it & had a story behind it. Beat was nice 4 dis topic I wasn't expectin' dis type of song no lie I was expecting something grimey but u straight u flipped it which is unexpected & koo.

M33kish
I feel like if u keep recordin' more & more you'll be droppin' sum dope songs pretty soon. Ur drop on dis was sick 2 me delivery was ill 2. I gave u multies, delivery & consistency cuz u was on it no lie. Da beat u picked on dis was so ol skoo I automatically feel in love wit it. I liked wat u did wit dis as well da lil fast flow helped ur stilo a lot. Ur mic presence is not bad dunno how long u been recordin' 4 but I heard da SWAG comin' out in u haha.

Vote: M33kish

yo M33k shit was on point

overall enjoyment - m33k
multis-m33k
chorus- Mic s
metas-m33k
quality-m33k
-DELIVERY-m33k
-CREATIVITY-tie
-CONSISTENCY-m33k
-FLOW-m33k

-yo good battle

but i gotta hand it to M33k, shit was fire cept for the chorus
and i felt your topic was more on point

while mic s shit sounded good.. but what the fuck crime did you do? adultry.. just wasnt getting your point


vote -m33kish

-MULTIES- M33k
-DELIVERY- Mic S (Some of M33k lyrics were lost behind the music)
-HOOK- Mic S
-CREATIVITY- M33k
-CONSISTENCY- M33k
-FLOW- Tie
-OTHER- Quality goes to Mic S

Damn a Tie.. Ok well since I have to go further I will judge this based on the tracks themselves. Since M33k actually gave us more to listen to and was able to hit the concept more this is where he edges this battle. Good battle in all though.. Good Shit fellas.

MVGT: M33k

ok guys here we gooooooooo.


listening to mic s first. beat is nice. quality sounds alot better. flow is on point so far. feels like im waiting for the lyrics to drop. i think with a couple tweaks on the delivery would make the slow flow sound a lil nicer. pretty good emotion in it. i think some dubs and shit would help out the hook. jus me tho. overall pretty darn good. a few slip ups i heard but nothing too drastic.

ok on to m22k. <---no typo. fuck your 3's haha

beat has a nice intro and drop. man im really diggin your flow now man. gots my head bobbin. you gotta work on your punch ins man. right around 1:39 you fall off pretty good. but you hop right back on with ease. yea your hook gotta go. WHAT THE FUCK IS WRONG WITH YOU DAWG?! haha. those little pauses in between verses dont help ya either. fix that shit NOW. overall a good listen man.

-MULTIES- m33k
-DELIVERY- m33k also. had my head bobbin the whole track.
-HOOK- Mic s. m33k that shit has to go brotha. all love tho
-CREATIVITY- m33k. i jus like the scheme he came with.
-CONSISTENCY- i feel both had their slip ups. pretty good tho. TIE
-FLOW- m33k. like i mentioned, he really had my attention. a little fixin on the mixin, and his shit would be proper.

overall great battle fellas.

mvgt M33K.

Mic your shit was a good song man. im just not a fan of the slooooow flow. i got bored a lil. more switch ups on your verse woulda helped your cause alot. keep at it man. quality sounded alot better also.

-MULTIES-meek
-DELIVERY-meek
-HOOK-meek
-CREATIVITY-meek
-CONSISTENCY-tie
-FLOW-tie
-OTHER-nice trackzzz broz
Mvgt:M33kish