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3rd Party Picked Our Topic: Vagina
2:30-5:00 minute time limit
At least 2 verses & 1 hook
Due - Monday 11:59 PM EAS

CATEGORIES TO VOTE ON:
-MULTIES-
-DELIVERY-
-HOOK-
-CREATIVITY-
-CONSISTENCY-
-FLOW-
-OTHER-

Any other rules you want to add just post them

no shit.. dope topic im down

Well aaaaaaalrighty then. Check

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Mic S wrote:check
-- Sun May 22, 2011 7:11 pm --
i got it wrote, just didnt record like i thought i was... can i turn it in tomorrow in the afternoon

I hate no shows
and i have no excuses
i could have recorded through the thunderstorm last night... but quality would have sucked... and monday well - these always drag but i had a busy one today

so here is what i put together i guess.. sorry -- i'll have to fix up chorus and hooks and turn this to an actual track when this battle done
[soundclick]10676363[/soundclick]

sorry for my tardiness. ENJOY!

[soundcloud]http://soundcloud.com/loonelou831/best-thing-ever-made[/soundcloud]

Well 1st off I'd like 2 thank da contestants 4 battlin' 2 da topic I posted on here. I felt like dis forum needed sumthin' krazy so dis is perfect 4 da battle.

Mic S
ur hook stood out 2 me more then Loon E's did. It's more catchy's then his I actually like wat u did wit it. I didn't like ur intro tho cuz u asked 4 a battle/collabo so yea next time don't even bother 2 say sorry. As long as we could hear it then we koo... quality is decent mixin' prob one of made it sound better as well if u took da time 2 do it. Ur verses were hella funny had me rollin'. U feel off on sum parts & lost ur breath a lil but u picked up on it def could tell it was a 1 take. Beat was krazy it was perfect 4 dis subject. I felt like da outro could've used another hook instead of it ended da way it did.

Loon E
I like wat u did wit dis 1 bro; da way u were talkin' bout it was like she was ur all. Hook was dope as well & ur verses were hilarious. Dat beat off line had me rollin' super hard I was like hell naw haha. Presence as usual was on point didn't hear n e mess ups. I liked wat u did wit da beat @ 1st I was like wtf then after ur voice come on da whole mood changed nice pick homie. It's def a bumper & has replay value.

-MULTIES- Both
-DELIVERY- Loon E
-HOOK- Mic S
-CREATIVITY- Both
-CONSISTENCY- Loon E
-FLOW- Loon E

Vote- Loon E Lou

good battle guys... its FINALLY nice to see some AUDIO BATTLES go down!!!! so thanx to both of you guys for mannin up n gettin on the mic!

BUT NOW ONTO THE VOTING!!!!!

Mic S

aite man... crappy takes don't win audio battles.... just saying... doesn't sound mixed very well at all... like ur in a bathroom or somethin... newayz man... the content was okay... don't sing anymore... lol it sounds like in some parts ur rushin dude... if u have a spot where it might not fit... either work on it to perfect it before u record or edit it out of the lyrics and make something work... i can't stress that enough cuz thats what i had trouble with.... revising is your BEST friend.... i like the concept u went with on ur track but it just didn't stick out to me cuz the quality was bad...

Loon E Lou

DAMMIT!!!!! how do you pull these outta ur ass man? like for real!!! hands down you GRABBED IT and SLAUGHTERED it...... kinda like some pussy haha (pun intended).... i mean it was good... beat choice was cool... the mixing was good... the whole vibe of it man had me turnin it up and just let it bump bro... haha.... good shit fam i think u took this hands down

BUT LETS GET TO THE CATAGORIES!!!!

-MULTIES- Tied
-DELIVERY- Loon Hands Down
-HOOK- Loon E Lou
-CREATIVITY- Both
-CONSISTENCY- Loon
-FLOW- Loon
-OTHER- Loon....Runner Up For Track Of The Year??????

Vote = Loon E Lou

2-0 uuuuuuuuuup

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This was a pretty easy battle to judge imo... nothing against the loser (don't take it personal)...

-MULTIES - Loon
-DELIVERY- Loon (by a hair. he just seemed way more comfortable in his delivery)
-HOOK- Mic S
-CREATIVITY- Tied
-CONSISTENCY- Loon
-FLOW- Loon
-OTHER- Loon, Judging the quality here....