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I am just a monster
hook & 1st verse me
2nd verse boss game\
3rd verse Ntalekt

Mixing has its flaws but besides that let me know what you think
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I'll have links posted with-in half hour.. let me listen to a few tracks first

Overall dis track wasn't dat bad I've heard songs like these b4 so it didn't really stand out 2 much 2 me but I think u guys did a decent job doin' ur own thing on da track. 2nd dude sounded like Slim Thug I was like wtf... 3rd dude sounded krazy like he was gonna murder someone. Verses were aight I was actually expecting more of a lyrical track. Hook was good 2 felt like it could've used additional ad libs 2 hyped up da song a lil bit more. Keep dropping Mic S I'm sure I'll find sumthin' 4rm u sooner or l8ter.

Good shit, I think I met you from BBE and said I would do a verse on this with you, sorry I was on bullshit but overall nice track. Try to clean your flow up a little the quality didn't really fuck with me too much but Imo the flow was a bit basic, 2nd verse did sound like slim thug lol but that would make him a good ghost writer lol jp. 3rd verse really did sound like a monster lol.

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thanks for feed.. ill work on the next hook on my next track.


here are my 2 links
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/when- ... 22300.html
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/game- ... ml#p171685

wasn't feelin the effects used, but overall this was decent, beat was koo, keep droppin mic s

duno if its effects used or just your quality, but your verse n hook was fucked up.. just didn't mesh well or sound right, imo.
your verse is straight, nothing special just basic flow and some self hype.. but i too was expectin something lyrical due to the title.. because your verse n the second didn't really come with any horrorcore styled lyrics as the title, or the beat suggested.
3rd verse prolly fit the beat an topic the best.. he just seemed into it better..

didn't like the 2nd guys voice, might have been just the beat but he sounded out of place.
not a bad track over-all.. hook needs some work, and just cleaning up the quality. keep at it though.

I think you should transition the first hook effects in half way through the first play at the start of the track. Kinda make it sound like your cranking up the beat

Definitely would bump this in my whip, Sealed 12" hitting in the back

Also, the second verse is hella contrast from everybody, and yes he sounds just like slim thugg after his first 4 bars lol

Beat is humpty dumpty makes me want to break something

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hmm beat is nice...

first guy..theres a effect or somethin that makes it sound
off or jumbled in some areas..rhyme scheme seems pretty cool...deliv seems ...not bad

ok that's da hook..deliv in da hook is stronger..but hard to understand some of it...

wow this beat is trippy..

2nd verse ..niice flo imo..consistent hits in da pocket

3rd verse..coo..smooth lyrics are clearer imo..i like it actually ..haha dubs are shifted ..coo

all in all this is an aight song..beats transition is kinda trippy .. i think its aight tho..keep doin ya thing playuh

okay yeah....

beats nice....

the effect is just WAY TOO MUCH man..... i mean u gotta effect on the hook and the verse!?!?!? the flow.... for first verse was kinda lackin IMO.... even the hook is kinda off like your rushin it or something man


second verse was fuckin sick... flow was consistent... verse was sick too... good shit i'd turn down his intro tho

third verse is probably the one that stands out the MOST.... good shit


i don't think the first verse stood strong with the second and third verse.... to me it was like you were just there as a filler... no hate but thats just how it felt... cuz verse 2 and 3 took over man.... its gotta be equal

give this a 6/10 the effects make it too noisy so get rid of those or lighten up on them or something dude lol