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Re: ShysT - Y'all Don't Know (Verse One)

Post by M33Kish »

not a big fan of auto tune but it wasnt all that bad since it was kinda catchy. "flow aint got no vacancies..." nice, the flow started of choppy but you evened it up quick and had a nice lil ending too it. Cant wait for the full song.
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I take it u did the beat too, not bad....The mix on the vocals need work, meaning remove a lil of the mud, besides that the lyrics were str8...The chorus was different, but in a good way, kinda unique in the style...overall not a bad track, like to hear how u finish it...
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Singing in the hook sounds clean and professional...a tad safe...but nice

lovin the beat...

nice vocal mixing...flow is smooth

good presence on track


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Re: ShysT - Y'all Don't Know (Verse One)

Post by Dos »

beats pretty cool. something i can rock to.
hooks not bad either, like Q said.. its safe, but does the what its meant to, its catchy an sticks wit'cha.

on your verse, flows smooth. presence and delivery is alright, not spectacular, just to be a lil more energetic.. but for this styled of beat it kinda fits.
over-all, your multi's are pretty nice and real consistent. nice to see that.
nice track.. finish it up, if you need a slot filled; get at me.

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Re: ShysT - Y'all Don't Know (Verse One)

Post by pest »

I feel like i hate to much...

THe hook was str8.. but the verse aint crakkin man.
Sounds too.. played i guess... Sounds like shit i heard a billion times.

Maybe this just aint my style.

Not trying to hate man...
Try and get lyricall... more complexity..
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Re: ShysT - Y'all Don't Know (Verse One)

Post by Ambiguous Realm »

this had some replay value, not an auto tune lover but this was alright

verse was eh...flow was nice but just nothin superb, then again his is more like somethin to dance to or do some dumb shit to

quality was decent, wasn't as crisp as i would have liked but it was koo,

overall this was a nice drop, i usually dont like listening to shit like this but it does justice
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