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this was written with the topic being process of creating a flow, basically, was gonna be an audio with hkx loon n someone else i forget lol, anyways forgot about this so leave some feed, its a rough draft but the basic idea is there

it's hard to plot i start to jot i grab the pen n paper, (time)
eight ways to make haste, and that's the end of nature (force)
at night time i write rhymes like practice with a stranger, (lost)
then verse one my words gone from vanishin erasers, (help)
i sit tight in dim lights, too dark to see reflections, (blind)
i spue a flow so beautiful my art's to be perfection, (pure)
correction, cause i mentioned only what i write, (speak)
i spit heavy, n get ready to slowly fuck the mic, (love)
in rap i spare none, so fill the track with snare drums(hate)
cause when i'm half way there it's like i'm back to square one, (trapped)
i graph the map, scrap the pad, be nice to fuckin finish this (wait)
same design, change the rhyme, rewrite a dozen images, (choice)
i think it through, make it new, then hide between the crevice, (fear)
been creative, innovative, tryna be the freshest (skill)
couple bars i struggle hard, i've written this with wisdom, (thought)
to make a flow, you take ya soul, and live within the rhythm, (free)

dope as fuckkk never read nothing like this,good idea to do it like this bro keep elevating

appreciate the feed, and the actual words in quotations were words i used before writing the lines, they were to build the feeling or thoughts of what was being said

Ey man i still hve the unfinished beat with my verse on it if u still wanna lay it. Cus daaamn this shit would be sick on a beat. Ur flow moves perfectly. I would likE to hear the adlibs on this. I think it would fit perfectly with ur verse. LETS HEAR IT!!!!!

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lol well i would probably rewrite a handful of lines if i were to do it for audio, like i said this is just a rough draft, thanks for the feedback everyone, and i probably wont be consistent with the drops yezzir, but there'll be another couple in the near future

this was dope.. rhyme scheme was nice-
vocab was cool - and it went together well

Nice


Good Flow Thru Out Tho You Could've Add'd Some Multies.. Maybe Throw Some Punches

I Definitely Wanna See This On Audio.. It'll Be Pretty Hot

I like the idea of this piece..it made me think more about what I was thinking of...your approach to the concept seemed different...and it came out nicely..if this is just a rough draft then I can't wait to see the finished product...keep writing braahhhhh

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yo man that was fire, ver eloquent, subtle and well executed.

i likes this shit, great title as well keep it up man

What I always expect from an Ekoms drop.

A few staggering lines, a lot of consistency and creativity.

Thanks for all the feedback on my latest piece, not only on aim, that I received when I woke up, but also on my actual written.

It means a lot, and reminded me of our great relationship before the world took us by the neck and ripped us apart.

"in rap i spare none, so fill the track with snare drums(hate)
cause when i'm half way there it's like i'm back to square one, (trapped)"

You said my rhymes inspired you to write some ill new shit. I'm glad they did, but you still have them sharp rhymes, that I think I'll always be envious of, probably because my style was molded out of yours.