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I Never New I was Going 2 Get Played –This-Hard-
Always Thought We Were going 2 Stay- stick from- The-Start
I Wish I could Take away The Trouble and That Fight was colder
I cant Breath Without Take me Back Buh For Now My Life is Over
Everyday I Would Think about you and Run to- your- Doorstep
What Did I do to deserve this Blood Pain Sores-and-Torment
You came worrying about our Relationship And You Delt- More
Cant belive you Played Me For Someone You Once felt-For
People Say its her Choice Just leave it alone and Respect- it
Its-pathetic- Im Not Giving It Up She Once said-it ( I Love You)…

This was pretty good man. You will get good grades on your poetry stuff.

Thanks for your feed complexity....Uppin.

This Is One Of The Best Piece's I've Seen you Drop Man..good Shiit, It's Deep With Meaning. When You Flow From The Heart It's Alot Easier To Write..

Props Man..Keep It Up!

Best shit ive seen you write, keep it up

-twiztid

first poem ive read from you. It was pretty good though man. I felt the emotion though.

Everyday I Would Think about you and Run to- your- Doorstep
What Did I do to deserve this Blood Pain Sores-and-Torment
You came worrying about our Relationship And You Delt- More
Cant belive you Played Me For Someone You Once felt-For

^best lines. You have made it longer though, but still it was a solid drop.