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24 hours from check...6 bars(12 lines)..house rules...respect

check

I'll drop SPLISH in the river just to make a SPLASH.
Even being named after that song he still won't take a bath.

Even your name is a noise yet nobody hears you.
I ain't playing games boy..Bet nobody fears you.

You wouldn't be HOT SHIT if your ass burst flames and blistered
You wouldn't have a "GOOD BAR" if your first name was "MR."

In this "battle of wits",SPLASH,you lack the weapon-ry
You got those "NYTAL" flows..they got me catching Z's.

I'll leave you like a beach in the Florida Keys.."covered in shells"
My flow is a "LETHAL WEAPON" like DANNY GLOVER AND MEL.

I'll give SPLISH SPLASH whip lash when my fists blast
I'll click clack,quick gats, He'll "shed pounds" like "slim fast"

Your firstnames Grim,so obvious im cheating death like the average violent videogame cheatcode win
bitch i can do it again,my bars harder than male pornstars and you blow them more than the outside n'inside wind

your diss shows your nothing but a bitch just like this.......

when i make a 'quick point'and leave mrs.grim more smoked than cheech n chong plus a bong in the mist

ok cobain,saying you decently rhyme,you just tryna act fly like snoop dogg on soul plane,
your so baked just like cake,burnt so when these judges rate you,you wont get close to a 7 or ATE




charlie sheens your new name,faggit now im on your brain like cocaine,
this is cold reign,rite now grims more closer to DEFEAT than a toe stain,

progressing like life,and im sharp like a knife,and you been dull,
grim below the flows like a pirates deadhoe,n grims mom exposes kids to sum dead ass head more than a decomposed skull



im more illegal than reading ya mail,splishsplash king of this ocean front youll be seeing the shells,hot as hell
fuckin grims mom now im deeper than wells,servin n workin,n'grim couldnt flip anything even if he was a 1997 kennan or kel

Ahh, I'm gonna say it was a catsweep to Grimm, I'd breakdown the catas but...it was pretty one sided, splishs format & line lengths threw off his flow, he had well, no multies...& his punches didn't hit hard at all. Atleast grim had SOME hard bars..

MVGT: Grim

seems as tho u struggled in this one splish...your 2nd bar was just rushed and weak to be honest with you...also 1 too many mom hits bro...I know you're better than this but...

gotta give my vote to Grim

GRIMM CAME HARDER THAN SPLASH WITH HARD PUNCHLINES , SPLASH ALSO CAME HARD BUT YA LAYOUT FLOP IT ALL

SO
MVGT = GRIMM

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3-0 me ko?

props grim,fun fucking battle,you got any tips or advice im really trying to get better,i guess i need to shorten my strucutre down...