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i made the beat and freestyled the lyrics, tell me what you think of my beat, thanks

soons I heard the beat, it reminded me of this skit

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nkq2jJRx5gY

I like the simple beat. I woulda liked the freestyle a bit slower, less words maybe; a simple rhyme to go with it(something like a Too Short rap).

well the flow, is the flow. u shoulda prolly left it out it you wanted me to really critique the beat. its farely repetetive. pretty simple. you might wanna add some hats. yea some hats would add alot to it. really make the beat bounce more. sounds like you just looped the 4 bars. more switchup, and ittl actually be ku lil beat. that way it doesnt sound so repetetive. better sounds would add also. differnt claps. maybe add a snare with the claps so it has a more original sound. i would say trash the bassline. at least switch it to a lower sub. sounds too funky. like some shit smoov e would rap to. anyway, there you go

HaHa..you crazy man...you freestyle this shit?...

well this beat could use some change ups..or a breakdown..but hey u use what you got..

the Lyrics...well this is pretty dope for a freestyle...
you def got a flo...i never heard any punch in either..
for what you did this was pretty good..but i still wanna
hear you write some shit maaan...pz..1 .

upping this shizzle

i think loon gave a good feed as far as the beat goes i would say as far as the flow goes try not to use the muthafucka so much or write your rhymes and then well that ended abruptly any way keep at it you'll be alright

Flow was tight, kinda fell off and got repetative in some places but still aiight. Wasn't feelin the beat though homie, kinda got annoying.

simple beat but its better freestyling to it, and i kinda like the flow, its fast but at least you talkin bout something... it is what it is, dope.

yeah man.... beats SUPER simple.... good effort tho.... verse was okay for a free style (thats what i took it as) lol newayz man good shit keep workin on ur beats

i agree with what everyone else says.. beat is simple