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Word, you post at Body Bags, dont you? This made me remember where I'd see you post before...

The beat is tight, but your delivery kills it man. I really like how the first verse was attacking. Sick. Solid presence, and good energy. Im digging the track. The hook is tight, and goes well with the vibe of the beat. Definitely feeling the second verse as well. Flow is on the fucking money... Man, I like the entire track. Shit is good bro. Keep dropping them!!!

Yes, I am from BBE. haha.
Been there for a while.
Appreciate the feed and the love. Really glad the replies coming to this (here and one other site) are all positive. haha.

yup. this shit is ill man. the beat selection is perfect. dope feel to it, good melody. you got that grimy feel to ur voice. the swag is there like no other man. a couple parts on the quality where your voice hits a low, makin it a BIT hard to hear the endin to the line. first verse outshines the second no doubt. the delivery is right on homie. you sound comfortable with the delivery which is ALWAYS key to any good song. i wouldnt know how you arent completely happy with this. always seekin perfection i suppose. cant knock that at all. I GOT STREET CRED, VISA OR MASTERCARD. haha dope man. like i mentioned, you definetly know what ur doin. quality is above par from alota shit ive heard on forums. iunno if you fuck with your vocals or go to a studio but other than the couple parts, everything is very audible. hopefully you stick around man. we got a few cats who do audio, so you could stay busy here. nice joint to introduce yourself with. keep that shit rollin brotha

i swear to god i commented back, lol.
anyways, appreciate the love. glad you liked it.. haha.
we should collab.

i think that was the jist of my other message.
errybody better get on the band wagon an love my shit..

You remind me of Chris Webby, by your voice & flow, lol...but I liked the track a lot, some good lyrics & flow throughout . Props.

appreciate the feed santo'

and 1 thing i forgot. Loon, i don't use a studio.. i record in my living room. im tryna move in aug. so when i do ima set up a booth in the basement. should make my quality slightly better.

Hahaha beat sounds sick..

yeah ya stepped up a bit ....delivs on ..flo's on...

haha..Daammnnn I reeaalllyyy Like this beat..sik.

okay yeah that hook is pretty nice.. lyrical

well what more can i say?...Dope Shit..

real tight man. your delivery is a BEAST! props!

flow and delivery on point
energy was dope
sick track... lyrics were cool - hook was ight
beat was cool
verse on point

this track was dope overall --- hook could use work but thats bout it

keep doing your thing

Damn DOS dis is cold homie no offense but u need 2 slap urself if u ain't happy wit da verses... presence on point... lyrics were insane beat is ill. Def re-record em if u need 2 I don't blame u I'm da same wit my music as well. Imma bout 2 add u on reverbnation bro. Keep us posted on da EP u drop so far I like wat I'm hearin' man u did justice 2 dat beat keep droppin'.

appreciate it Tre, its been a long road of not having the ability to get on a comp. or record, or even have time to write.. just started getting back into it not to long ago..

Nah, appreciate the view man. glad you liked the delivery, prolly one of my better attributes.

Mic.. although i don't agree about the hook, its kinda what i was aiming for; a more lyrical approach, i do sympathize with your view. ive been told a few times that the hook almost sounds like a mini-verse.. hooks are something im attempting to work on..

HKX.. glad you enjopy it, and yes.. im a bit of a perfectionist. i probably won't re-record, due to laziness.. but i'll think about it a lot lol.. i have a few more tracks to record, an one to write.. hope you guys like them when they are done.
glad you liked the track, put a lot of work into it.

appreciate all the love, in fact.
any one else with advice/suggestions and opinion feel free to drop them, im always looking for area's to improve.

Beat is tight...I like Customz...

Flow had me noddin my head...and voice is grimey like cats from Onyx...

feelin it all the way around



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this shit is tight, i dont know why i aint click on this shit sooner, and hkx is right your verses are nice. beat is sick and the emotion you slapped on it fit nice. i like your spittin voice man no homo, keep droppin, and keep pushin out dope shit like this.

The beat is disgusting, I want it lol, the energy and passion in your verse is sooo raw, real hot b...the grimey style def. fits this, makes it street...Also ya lyrics are on point and creates the type of feeln one should get from the track, its solid the way it is, but as a fellow perfectionist tweaks aren't bad just dont scratch everything cuz this is nice...