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"Baby Steps"a lil some some for the ladies

Posted: Sat May 14, 2011 9:23 am
by justgreatnessncc
Greetings to illestlyrics !!! I have an aspiring hip hop group and im looking to network with other artists as well. check out some of our music!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_KeMEJ4OwRc

www.reverbnation.com/JustGreatness

Re: "Baby Steps"a lil some some for the ladies

Posted: Sat May 14, 2011 9:27 am
by Loon E Lou
you might wanna go feed some posts if you want any on yours. jus sayin. welcome tho

Re: "Baby Steps"a lil some some for the ladies

Posted: Sat May 14, 2011 11:27 am
by Dos
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well, the hook is pretty nice. catchy an something you can vibe out to.
1st verse is cool. fits with flow an presence/delivery.. but he just doesn't sound into the song, and the lyrics don't really follow with the hook, imo. its kinda like a free verse type of feel to it.

2nd verse is nice. solid actually, nice presence/delivery and it works better with the hook.. an he seems cocky in a way, ya know. which fits the beat great..

not a bad track for what its about, ya know. not my kind of stuff, but i dig it. keep at it.

Re: "Baby Steps"a lil some some for the ladies

Posted: Tue May 17, 2011 1:29 am
by Defiance
i liked this shit man, good lyrics good swag, first verse gott me rocking and the others keep it going.. really not feeling the chorus tho.

good shit man

welcome to illest man