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Crimes of Flesh

Posted: Thu May 12, 2011 9:24 am
by Defiance
more or less its a crime of the flesh,
oppressed in your readers digests
and digressed pressed between the lines
propaganda infecting your minds
reflecting the times for what they are
its murder in the form of your cars
leaving earth scared in our dreams of riches
most are numbers or pure statistics
never realistic cause our ideals are convoluted
polluted like our environment and inconclusive
what a nuisance the trivia of man
born from gods anal gland onto the land and sands
with no belief in moving forward
its perpetually stuck fighting for borders
its pennies and quarters i our fight to die
it aint flight or fight its fight from flight
our life is trife so we unleash with fright
just to keep our minds and sleep at night
belief in life is purely evidential
as we build our homes an residential s
over bodies buried in hidden temples
and we call our selves holy
the unholy union over alimonies
while we dress our scars til their phony
dreaming of peace in a time of war
finding my self questioning the core
i guess its just the prophecy of AL Gore





(i'll add more tommaro, ran out of time)

Re: Crimes of Flesh

Posted: Thu May 12, 2011 12:48 pm
by Kause mc
hey bro cool verse lookin forward to the rest

Re: Crimes of Flesh

Posted: Fri May 13, 2011 5:48 am
by leeroi green
are you really going to finish this again i like your flow and the theme is green i gotta love it maybe only one or two lines i stumbled over really no need for punches when you clear and direct in your message nice drop D

Re: Crimes of Flesh

Posted: Tue Jun 14, 2011 8:42 am
by MonuMental
Nice message in this one, bruh. You structured and worded it well, with your usual touch. We're on a foundation of rot, here in this country, and world. Noone can ever point that out enough.

Re: Crimes of Flesh

Posted: Tue Jun 14, 2011 8:43 am
by EcKsTaSy
great skill..good shit bro..nice nice