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ME POEMS R NOT MY TYPE
ILL BE JUS ALL IGHT
ALL I DO IZ JUS TYPE
I DONT CRY I DONT LIE I JUS WANT TO BE WIT GOD
NIGGAS HOLD ME BACK CLICK CLACK CLICK CLACK POW PEOPLE WONDER Y I DONT SMILE
MY MOMMA AT SCHOOL I FEEL ALONE 4 A WHILE FOR THAT I JUS WANNA GO IN SMILE 4 A WHILE
NEW FACES NEW WALL SUMTIMES I JUS FALL
MY DAD IZ IN JAIL
I NEVER START TO FELL
I AM TO FUNNY I AM TO SMART THATS Y I NEVER START
WHO I AM ME


LORRANEISHA JAIYCHELLE CHADLER

AND THATS WHO I BE

This was an ok drop you show some potential just work on imagery and flow and i would give it a 6 out of 10

But. Right now ill give you 4/10

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-- Wed May 11, 2011 10:06 am --

This was an ok drop you show some potential just work on imagery and flow and i would give it a 6 out of 10

But. Right now ill give you 4/10

-- Wed May 11, 2011 10:07 am --

This was an ok drop you show some potential just work on imagery and flow and i would give it a 6 out of 10

But. Right now ill give you 4/10