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Part one of a 4 Part piece.
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It Vibes Within'em,
Rides At Sides The Dirty Streets, Cry With Rhythm,
Decides A Victim,
This Is A Horrible Place To Raise Anything, Besides Suspicion,
The Lies Have Risen,
Defies The Cries He Try's To Slide A Vision,
Describes His Mission,
It Drives His Mind To Such High's To Twist In,
But Find Whats Given?
The Rhymes Confide In Lines Entwined In Prisons,
Mines A Prism,
The Signs That Shine Are Designed With Wisdom,
To Distract A Thought,
React With Rats Vast To Contrast Rappourt,
The Facts Distraught,
Off Track With Raps In The Past He's Caught,
Detached From All,
Sad That His Slack Has Cracked The Wall,
Fast It Falls,
Crash To The Mats Where Disasters Call,
But Reality's Twisted,
Humanity Filled With Vanity, Demands But He Missed It,
His Insanity's Gifted,
Just A Plan To Be Mad At Me When Abmormality Hits Shit,
So Refer To A Notion,
Not Differ When I Turn It's To Learn From The Ocean,
So Absurd With Emotion,
He Burned What He Earned Til He'd Confirm What Was Chosen,
The Road Lead Him Far,
Cold With An Aroma That Arose From The Start,
To Hold In Remark,
Golden But When It's Stolen You Were Home In The Dark,
As Spirits Demonstrate,
The Finish To Diminish And You Hear It In His Wake,
Near It With Such Pace,
It's The Image In His Lyrics That Brought Cynics To The Gate,
He Was, Grown With A Passion,
Unknown In His Home And Alone With His Actions,
Prone To Imagine,
His Zone That He'd Control If Thrown Into Sanctum,
But His Soul Is The Ransom,
A Hole In The Role But The Goal Is The Answer
Chose A Romancer,
Fold But It's Sold That What Molds Him A Cancer
Drowning His Sorrows,
Hounding The Poundings Simply Found In Tomorrows,
Soundings Of Hollows,
Rounding & Clowning Astounding What Follows
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Dude thats epic...
Your multies off the hook...

Nothing bad to be said about this piece.

9/10

You went in on this homie. Love the multies and diverse rhyme schemes. Had some good imagery too so its nice to see that the rhymes didnt really seem forced and the content limited. Good shit bro. Rolled right of the tongue and almost chugged with rhythm.

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well, i was recitin this out loud and my co worker over heard me. now he thinks im a genius lyricist. thank you for that. haha. awesome piece

Ey thanks for the feed people, any feed you want returning just hit me with a link or something

yo what you been doing.. studying hip hop under KRS one..
this shit was bonkers.. long as fuck.. but strongly lyrical liked it

keep coming with that fire

wow Mutual youve stepped up alot since i last peeped you out...flo is pretty epic on this one..

rythm and schemes are lined up ..like a coke party..dope!!

love da concept and really dug the finshing thoughts....

Unknown In His Home And Alone With His Actions,
Prone To Imagine,
His Zone That He'd Control If Thrown Into Sanctum,
But His Soul Is The Ransom,
A Hole In The Role But The Goal Is The Answer
Chose A Romancer,
Fold But It's Sold That What Molds Him A Cancer
Drowning His Sorrows,
Hounding The Poundings Simply Found In Tomorrows,
Soundings Of Hollows,
Rounding & Clowning Astounding What Follows

real nice man deep as fuck....keep doin ya thing

Ey thanks for the feed guys no doubt much appreciated, anything you want feeding or any help with anything just get at me with a link or something

This Is A Horrible Place To Raise Anything, Besides Suspicion,

love that line yo