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check, man

imma add no one under 50 posts can vote an due in 48 hours. is that cool with you.


check-mate

yes sir.. that's cool

You may be God but im your Father KRONOS it aint your time/
to win so imma give you this test battle so you wont want round 2, you coulnt be sour if you ate a lime/(kronos titan of time)

imma make you an offer you cant refuse/
stop rappin and you wont ever have to lose/

1st off you work 9 to 7 and get payed 2 dollars an hour/(1972)
this is just a warm up to what illest is about so dont make a face that looks sour/

you wear tights and hide behind a mask at night/
my first thought was this guy is cool, well that was first sight/

QWIK KEY...

{...I RUPTURE SALES,THAT BUST THE FRAIL Cuz Saint Avioding Heat Like angels Ducking Hell....}

{...I puncture WELL to leaders SNUFF THIS CREEPER CuZ joe avioded ESSENTIAL like Tha R&B SINGER....]

{...im the SMELL THAT LINGERS.. you FUNCTION WEAKER .. BUSTING MIXTURES Ill make saint (Saints) flop LIKE RIGGIE BUSH with CONSTRUCTIVE FIXTURES...]

{...iLL BUCK THIS TEACHER HE UNDER THE BLEACHERS Ill eat him Like small fry's with MUNCHKIN FEATURES...}

JS



You may be God but im your Father KRONOS it aint your time/
to win so imma give you this test battle so you wont want round 2, you coulnt be sour if you ate a lime/(kronos titan of time)
^^
this line is stretched pretty far.scheme was off .not feelin da punch bro srry... 1/5

imma make you an offer you cant refuse/
stop rappin and you wont ever have to lose/
^^
this was pretty coo..coo concept scheme and multi 3/5

1st off you work 9 to 7 and get payed 2 dollars an hour/(1972)
this is just a warm up to what illest is about so dont make a face that looks sour/
^^^
Not feelin this punch..that was 2 sour.. 2/5


you wear tights and hide behind a mask at night/
my first thought was this guy is cool, well that was first sight/
^^^
well i get it..decent effort 2/5
8/20

GF

{...I RUPTURE SALES,THAT BUST THE FRAIL Cuz Saint Avioding Heat Like angels Ducking Hell....}
^^^
coo line...3/5

{...I puncture WELL to leaders SNUFF THIS CREEPER CuZ joe avioded ESSENTIAL like Tha R&B SINGER....]
^^^
not bad concept..2.5/5


{...im the SMELL THAT LINGERS.. you FUNCTION WEAKER Ill make saint (Saints) flop LIKE RIGGIE BUSH with CONSTRUCTIVE FIXTURES...]
^^^
schemes aight concept could be good but ya wording's a lil iffy...2.5


{...iLL BUCK THIS TEACHER HE UNDER THE BLEACHERS Ill eat him Like small fry's with MUNCHKIN FEATURES...}
^^^
this was aight too not fabulous but i guess since you dropped 2nd you knew this would be enought so..2/5

10/20

mvgt GF ..

@Saint it looks like you rushed this one , maybe underestimated him a bit..keep doin ya thing elevation is inevitable..pz

0-1 uppin for votes

JOE:

You may be God but im your Father KRONOS it aint your time/
to win so imma give you this test battle so you wont want round 2, you coulnt be sour if you ate a lime/(kronos titan of time)

WTF? NO.

imma make you an offer you cant refuse/
stop rappin and you wont ever have to lose/

COMPLETE SHIT.

1st off you work 9 to 7 and get payed 2 dollars an hour/(1972)
this is just a warm up to what illest is about so dont make a face that looks sour/

ANOTHER SOUR PUNCH? WTF. GARBAGE.

you wear tights and hide behind a mask at night/
my first thought was this guy is cool, well that was first sight/

REALLY GAY.





{...I RUPTURE SALES,THAT BUST THE FRAIL Cuz Saint Avioding Heat Like angels Ducking Hell....}

U ALREADY WON WITH THIS LINE.

{...I puncture WELL to leaders SNUFF THIS CREEPER CuZ joe avioded ESSENTIAL like Tha R&B SINGER....]

NO MORE 'AVOIDED' PUNCHES, ESP. NOT BACK TO BACK.

{...im the SMELL THAT LINGERS.. you FUNCTION WEAKER .. BUSTING MIXTURES Ill make saint (Saints) flop LIKE RIGGIE BUSH with CONSTRUCTIVE FIXTURES...]

U TIRED, BUT FAILED.

{...iLL BUCK THIS TEACHER HE UNDER THE BLEACHERS Ill eat him Like small fry's with MUNCHKIN FEATURES...}

EH. NO



GODFATHER WON THIS CUZ HE ALMOST KNOWS WHAT A MULTI IS. PUNCHES ACTUALLY MADE SENSE..

VOTE: GF

bar vs bar godfather outshined saint, his flow was a lot better, punches were better, and his rhymescheme was nicer, it was a cat sweep although i felt a lot of forced multis from godfather, still a much better delivery than joe saint brought

vote:GodFather


-records updated, battle closed-

GodFather wins by KO