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you might be the PRINCE but you better bow to the KING/
stop trying to rap you cant so go sing/

the only thing DARk about you is your shit/
you better dial 9-1-1 cause your gonna need a medical kit/

stop running before i start breaking your fine-china/
imma show everyone how fake you are that your RAPS will read MADE IN CHINA/(i know i rhymed the same word)

Prince better watch his son/
cause im like 3-2- I 1(won)/

Since when is a prince a poor homeless man/
he should have went to high school with a plan

Just 'cause you ain't ever had, pussy, don't make you a Saint
You're just an anchovi in the sea I am the master n you're the bait*

better hurry ya ass to church n pray for your disGRACE
I'm surgical, split cha vertical, rearrange ya face

rip you apart limb by limb
you too gassed like 'Shell' but we found out you justa 'shrimp'

your verse don't even matter, I'm eatin emcees n you ain't even make the platter
feed ya debree I'mma natural disaster
I bring the 'degrees' you justa match (stick) you getting 'sonned' (sun) like a prayer by a pastor
(Father, we thank thee, etc.)

*masterbate


basic shit..
Apologies for any offence taken religously..

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nice drop prince

uppin for votes

Joe
you might be the PRINCE but you better bow to the KING/
stop trying to rap you cant so go sing/
Not so much, noticed the name play, but no real punch or ohh factor.
the only thing DARk about you is your shit/
you better dial 9-1-1 cause your gonna need a medical kit/
Wordplay nice, but thats about it. no real tie in to a punch
stop running before i start breaking your fine-china/
imma show everyone how fake you are that your RAPS will read MADE IN CHINA/(i know i rhymed the same word)
Set up line was nice, but fell down a cliff on the punch. Wording was messed up above all i guess.
Prince better watch his son/
cause im like 3-2- I 1(won)/
Filler?
Since when is a prince a poor homeless man/
he should have went to high school with a plan
No punch either. Your drop wasnt horrible, you just never really punched or attacked your opponent. You've been taking too many tips from money and teddy, uz have the same problems.

Prince
Just 'cause you ain't ever had, pussy, don't make you a Saint
You're just an anchovi in the sea I am the master n you're the bait*
i see what you intended with masterbate, but it's kind of a stretch. The set up was a nice name play though.
better hurry ya ass to church n pray for your disGRACE
I'm surgical, split cha vertical, rearrange ya face
no real punch, but the wording and rhyme scheme shows potential.
rip you apart limb by limb
you too gassed like 'Shell' but we found out you justa 'shrimp'
Wordplay was pretty cool, but again, the punch? and flow was thrown off here.
your verse don't even matter, I'm eatin emcees n you ain't even make the platter
feed ya debree I'mma natural disaster
I bring the 'degrees' you justa match (stick) you getting 'sonned' (sun) like a prayer by a pastor
(Father, we thank thee, etc.)
isnt this 3 lines? which puts you over? anyhow, im not sure what a prayer has to do with anything really, punch purposes, but the wordplay was decent. Overall, you lacked punching Joe as well, try aiming harder, or throw some personals.



Overall, not the best I've read, but they both show potential.
MVGT D.ouble P.enetration.
Simply because they tied in almost everything, but his wordplay was a tad bit better than Joe's.

0-1 uppin for votes

Dark prince won this battle.
but jesus H. Christ yall need to elevate. u have a LOOONG ways to go.

DP atleast tried to use wordplay so he wins.

2-0 DP

Gotta agree ...Prince won this battle..but it wasn't much of a battle, felt like both of em held back