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Rough draft.. kinda weak but w/e

Mercy Is For pussies, so Ima Take it to the finish-
Ignore the pain For the game, Tell me Hows it rags to riches-
When im holdin signs on corners and im beggin for a Nickel-
Reminicin Childhood When Everything was small n simple-
So Easy, Believe me when i say that struggle Proceeds me-
Morals Receeding, Prolly Why im Fukkin shit up eaisly-
Tryna come up onna dollar but i never hold breath
Just Load chests when i Hold Techs, Into a bank Like a Bold Vet-
Tell em all to shut the fukk up or get raped and then killed-
Not a word From a soul and its straight to the till-
Stop it after one or should i be makin a mill?-
IM Lovin the smella money and the way that it feels-
Put the money in the bag, Then Its out the door i go-
Gettaway sittin safe, A Piece of shit volvo-
Fukk it hitta Dealership, Foor this shit, I got the money-
Steady keep it movin like the energizer bunny-

Hook:
I Said hey hoe, Get outta my way yo
cuz im about my paceos
Got my mind on my money and my finger on the trigger
aint gon stop it till im droppin or i hit the higest figure

This was pretty good, could be fixed up a bit
but since it's a rough draft you might see what you need
the hook is alright..not really a hook I would use
but the idea of this piece is decent...pretty good so far
can't wait to read the finished piece...keep it up!