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-- Fri May 06, 2011 1:01 am --

before this,bet he failed in other colleges,coudnt make it, 26 and still stay with ,a mind as small as lil kids. a real retard, hes buying their conaiving,lying talk to get him to an asylum from the comMITTY,A fool sale , to this dude gay

-- Fri May 06, 2011 1:08 am --

his losses should be higher,he lost his mum to my dick,fuel to the fire ,cum all in her pussy.He wanted to battle cuz of what i did to this ass hole, pulled an elton john,forced his dad to fuck him in the ass,pik the white flag yo,i got you mapped hoe

-- Fri May 06, 2011 1:11 am --

you awaken from a bad dream,find your taken to a land real,where faker and haters land in,where im the freddy,i kill ya with a machette from my lab of heavy weapon

-- Fri May 06, 2011 1:12 am --

you couldnt beat me even if i were you producer, take you whack rhymes and move down

You should call yourself j plastic...
weak structure couldn't handle the heat/

You're like a woman the way you melt when I speak,
pussy goin get beat/

I'm a VAGINAtarian you are what I eat, I'll have your toes curl on de-feet,
I wouldn't want you to go ending your streak/ (losses in a row)

It is what it is for 3 bars.

expo,mitty gona go to university at full sail and that line .!you couldnt beat me if i were your producer suposta be you couldnt beat me even if you were my producer

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-- Fri May 06, 2011 1:23 am --

expo,mitty gona go to university at full sail and that line .!you couldnt beat me if i were your producer suposta be you couldnt beat me even if you were my producer

-- Fri May 06, 2011 1:24 am --

expo,mitty gona go to university at full sail and that line .!you couldnt beat me if i were your producer suposta be you couldnt beat me even if you were my producer

Alright this looked like an unfair battle

Flow-mitty
Punches-mitty
Wordplay-mitty
Enjoyment-mitty
Mulities-tie


MVGT-MITTY

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Flow-NEITHER, both were off, J's structure made it super hard and Mittys short to long line pattern made it hard.
Punches-NEITHER, both either open or failed at hitting each other
Wordplay-TIE, Making words up and playin on plastic melting, kind of, and the committy and full sail flip.
Enjoyment-MITTY, only cuz i could read it better.
Mulities-NEITHER


Pretty weak battle on both ends. MVGT Mitty




IF YOU DON'T KNOW WHAT SOME OF THE CATEGORIES ARE DON'T FUCKING VOTE. ASK BEFORE YOU DO SO YOU UNDERSTAND WHAT YOUR VOTING ON

I'm not gonna break this down...I'm just gonna say

+1 Mitty

Jsteel, if you structure your verses better, they'd make for a better read. Maybe you could've taken this one, but then again, I don't see where you rhyme...

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