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In my bathing suit, gazin thru the shades at the grey and blue/
Sky above when I see the clouds take the shape of you/
I hate to face the truth but I gotta let go and make it thru/
Cuz this kind of heart burn isn't what Pepto was made to soothe/
Chasin booze, pennin these memories so I can start erasin/
Cuz if we traded views, I don't want you to see that my heart was achin/
Yeah its hard to say it but I know that right now is better/
Than any kind of happiness that we could have found together/
What was bound is severed, pain replaced the sounds of pleasure/
Vowed to climb a mountain but we doubted it would amount to never/
But bliss is short, I know you never wished to get divorced/
Marraige thrives on teamwork and we were playin different sports/
Ran a different course, all the blackened days made us act insane but/
Now that we're both smiling, I have to say that I can't complain much/
A lot of laughs had came, here's an empty glass to put em in/
Cheers to friendship, exactly what this should've been/

Pain. Acceptance. Enough said. Nice drop, dude.

Man, good delivery and beat. The simplicity in this was nice, with cross over rhymes, couple nice images painted, and your ending lines are fucking monstrous.

A lot of laughs had came, here's an empty glass to put em in/
Cheers to friendship, exactly what this should've been

I bet that how a lot of people feel.

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I'm reeeeeally feeling this piece
the vibe on it was sooooooo smooth!
the flow was incredible, and the way you weaved each word
really makes this piece worthwhile...hopefully you record it
and finish a few more verses...this is niiiiiiiice

Damm man the flow on this was mad crazy, i had to get in and check it out when i saw it was Ruckus and you aint lost anything have you man, dope drop no doubt about it so many lines that had so much emotion and could really tell the message you had to convey and shit, was a great drop no doubt keep it coming

Uppin.

oh myyy gaddddd lol dope shit! classic!!

only thing that threw me off was the bathing suit opener lol

killer ending great flow everything on point..favorite drop of the year for me so far

Ruck i hate u for being so good haha

This was a flawless piece. It was on some grown man shit: Dealing with what happened, expressing your emotions, but handling it and not being a bitch about it. You also had clever punchlines and unique multiple rhyme schemes.

10/10 --- good shit...