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This is a track that I tailor made the beat for solo, wrote solo, and spit solo. It's on a subject I'm sure everyone can relate to: Heartache and pickin up pieces to see what was up. I call it Waiting, but my heart calls it Renee... I hope you enjoy and drop some feed.

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Got that bass kickin. Lyrics expressed the story well. Keep doin ya thing

I like it alot, solid piece to me, the chorus was the highlight, it set the mood for the song very well..the verse weren't really my style by they fit and dind't detract from the song and it's mechanics were on point, so good drop man, can't wait to hear more

I'm diggin this shit bro, the hook is the does I've heard in a long time. And good job on matching everything together, the beat is pretty slick, sounds kinda old school and I'm feelin it hard (no homo) lol. The verses were pretty coo and I like the Mic presence, for some reason I imagined you to sound like a cocky teenager but you rode this beat nice as fuck. Ima bang this shit to my ex bitch while I stand outside of her window with a "take me back/ I'm waiting hoe" sign.

DOPE!!!!

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Lol @ the sign part, that shit cracked me up. Haha. Appreciate the feed all.

Man, this track was nice. Flow was on point, emotion was there, nice piece. Cant really say anything bad about it at all. Keep dropping man!

Appreciate the feed, bruh!!

MonuMental nice track.... dope beat u picked a good 1 4 dis song. Flow is koo, emotion was koo as well, & lyrics were nice. My only prob wit dis song is dat I felt like ur emotion on it could been upped a lil more; I also didn't like da outro on it. Overall dis is a good song imma give dis an 7/10.

This is great man! Ur dam right i can relate, awesome hook, dope beat, the flow was a bit too slow for my liking but all in all i think this is the best "break up" song ive heard in a long time. Its so played out but in a way u kept it original no wat im sayin? Very nice fam keep it up

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The chorus was dope my dude, beat was sick and lyrics were on point. I agree with HKX, your emotion on the verses could be upped a lil more, either than that this is good. Ill give it a 7.5/10

hell yeah homie... i love this shit man.... i'm goin thru the same shit bruh.... the chorus was SICK MAN!!!! love the harmonies.... keep droppin shit like this fam.... give this an 8/10

dope emotion on the hook, verses were dope - cool lyrics.. flow and delivery was on point - wouldn't mind if you put a bit more into the verses but it was still dope no doubt, can still feel emotion no doubt.... good track dope drop

ok llike how it starts.. beat is nice...

Hook..i like it man..hmm i think the lw on da hook could be a lil lower..like the lyrics and concept too..
aight vocalz sound aight on da verse..flow is cool
hmm yeah your right on subject..and i hear any slips yet and im almost thru the 2nd verse..

aight this is a pretty cool lil track here my G..def ..

I appreciate all the awesome feed I got on this!! I've noted much and improvements shall be realized in action. Gracias, amigos.

I myself think that the beat could've been heard more. I liked the beef of the song more than the chorus though. Some nice lyrics and flow.

Solid 7.5/10