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i'll kick a flow so you feeling the chills, your lacking the skills/
i got you in deep waters but your missing the gills/
subliminal thrills, have you jumping from the steepest of hills/
and the rhythm has you higher then Hitlers gas and electricity bills/
come over and face my faction, i have you tripping over the actions/
every verse written is no less then satisfaction/
bars created for interaction, top of the list is where im at son/
i put the pen to paper and atom explode in a chain reaction/
i suggest you disperse, or contact a medical nurse/
because the last ride you taking is on a spiritual hearse/
this shit is a curse, you need to keep rocking a purse/
do some soul searching and have your rhythm reversed/
your tasting the gravel, your whole style is fragile/
put a clean cut on ya chest your bleeding from the scalpel/
lets take it to the grapple, my style of lyrics is astral/
so your getting put down like disease infected cattle/

sounds like a diss rap, directed towards who i wonder?

but none the less some dope lines liked the hitlers bills line

and welcome to illest man, seems like you'll be a good edition

hey thank you man XD
glad to be here. and it wasnt a diss to anyone just most my stuff is like this. My battle stuff is more rugged.

Most of the multi's were right on point and I found your flow easily. You did really well with some metaphors, but some seemed really simple and kind of forced. Over-all, I liked the drop and hope to see you bring more to the table. Welcome to Illest.

Thank you Murk.
i'll be sure to come back stronger every time

Nice drop man, liked the flow some of the lines were dope, hope to hear more from u soon

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