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I could sum up the rest or this text in one breathe, fuck pest/
if the maggot wasn't faggot he'd instantly suck less/

pest couldnt make a flo-ride if all he lived off was crest/
spend your whole life and never get the scent of dick off ya breathe/

fuck boy you fuck boys but then what else is you gon do/
you wouldnt have a shot at pussy filming moulan rouge/

and heres another fact of life the ILL will move on soon/
and remember pest as wearing dresses playing to wong foo/

this aphid bitch is faking sick he thinks he fancy saying nigga/
dont get mad that when i catch him i'm a have to smack a ginger/

this is a man to gnat collision what the hell has dude been sniffin/
you dont have the bars mak laz in alcatraz couldnt help you be a prison/

you took the wrong approach you need to flea before you're ticked off/
i 'll rid you like the sitcom the black flag you gotta spoon to get your kicks off/

i'll kill you with basics, sicks shots smoking barrel thats ILL fumigation/
if you're gassed up i'll strike a match and thats ILL lumination/

no magic a flick of the wrist is to blame for blain's disappearing/
and i aint talkin cards and candy when i say i'll lift his spirit/

to kill a pest a small step he'll get sent to heaven early/
meaning i could win hands down and i aint dissin s3v3n th1rty/

your shit wouldnt bang in the trunk as the D.C sniper/
you'd just get ate up like a deceased spider/

and as promised pest will leave in embarrassment/
as far as ILL goes its prophecy that m33k will inherit it/

EASY
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Yo...

You a cry baby Bitch, Im screamin Fukk this little sob/
Whats the matter Jive turkey? I just said you sukked a little cokk// (This started over him bitchin bout me sayin he sukks dikk, Watch Semi Pro)

Faggots Rhymes is Bunk, He Thinkin hes Chronic? take that stuff back-
Now Watch me 'BURN GREEN QUICK' Like a "DRIED UP DUB SACK"

How Could i Leave Leeroi 'Green With Envy', When hes turnin 'Yellow' Gradually/
This Bitch Will Never 'Graduate', The Faggots Forever in 'The Acadamy'//

Fukk Your Avy, I got this 'Dragons Balls' and he's soon-to-die/ (Chekk His Sig)
You're weak, Your 'Sayians' Aint 'SUPER', everyone 'boo-da-guy'// (Sayins/budaki)

You Fukkin with an 'XL'son, You Just A Half Pint Tryna brawl-
This kid aint a 'Heavy Weight', I Leave 'LG' Feelin 'Small'-

Ya Wack-Raps couldnt 'Blast bad luck' if they were 'Black-Cats' With Lit Fuses/ ( Fire Crackers/Supersition of Crossin Black cats)
Catch Daps? stand back, I'll Fukkin sock your wack ass till your bruisin -

I could Convict-Him Offa A dic-tum, This is my house, watch me evict-him-
Then Leave This 'Asshole Scarred For life' Like a 'Butt Rape Victem'-

I'll Cripple this kid, Watch his 'Body Decay' When I 'Gank-Green'/(Gangrene)
Kid your Not even 'Semi Hard' Call this kat a 'Lame Wet Dream//

My punches hit you hard as shit and knock you off balance/
Witness me 'skin your crew alive', you can call that 'raw Talent'//

-- Wed May 04, 2011 11:13 pm --

VOTES?!

-Punches= 1
-Flow= 1
-Personals= 1
-Multies= 1
-Enjoyment= 1

Total 5, 24 lines; 12 bars text, 12 * 5 = 60 points possible

I could sum up the rest or this text in one breathe, fuck pest/
if the maggot wasn't faggot he'd instantly suck less/
Pun-.5, F- 1, P- 0, M- 1, E- 1, T- 3.5./5
pest couldnt make a flo-ride if all he lived off was crest/
spend your whole life and never get the scent of dick off ya breathe/
Pun- 1, F- 1,P- 0, M- 0, E- 1, T- 3/5
fuck boy you fuck boys but then what else is you gon do/
you wouldnt have a shot at pussy filming moulan rouge/
Pun- .5, F- 1, P- 0, M- 0, E- 0, T- 1.5/5
and heres another fact of life the ILL will move on soon/
and remember pest as wearing dresses playing to wong foo/
Pun-0, F-1, P-.5, M-O, E-0, T-1.5/5
this aphid bitch is faking sick he thinks he fancy saying nigga/
dont get mad that when i catch him i'm a have to smack a ginger/
PUN-.5, F-1,P-.5, M-0, E-0, T- 1.5/5
this is a man to gnat collision what the hell has dude been sniffin/
you dont have the bars mak laz in alcatraz couldnt help you be a prison/
PUN-.5,F-1,P-0,M-0,E-1, T- 2.5/5
you took the wrong approach you need to flea before you're ticked off/
i 'll rid you like the sitcom the black flag you gotta spoon to get your kicks off/
pun-.5, F-0, P-1, M-.5, E-.5, T- 2.5/5
i'll kill you with basics, sicks shots smoking barrel thats ILL fumigation/
if you're gassed up i'll strike a match and thats ILL lumination/
PUN-1, F-1, P-1, M-.5, E-1, T- 4.5/5
no magic a flick of the wrist is to blame for blain's disappearing/
and i aint talkin cards and candy when i say i'll lift his spirit/
PUN-.5, F-.5, P-0, M-.5, E-0, T-1.5/5
to kill a pest a small step he'll get sent to heaven early/
meaning i could win hands down and i aint dissin s3v3n th1rty/
PUN-.5, F-.5, P-0, M-.5, E-1, T- 2.5/5
your shit wouldnt bang in the trunk as the D.C sniper/
you'd just get ate up like a deceased spider/
PUN-1, F-1, P-.5, M-1, E-.5, T-3/5
and as promised pest will leave in embarrassment/
as far as ILL goes its prophecy that m33k will inherit it/
PUN-.5, F-1, P-.5, M-.5, E-1, T-3.5/5
So all in all, not a bad verse at all. Something that would have helped you a lot is more personals. If you had more, this would have been closer to fire. As it stands, I'm giving you 31/60 <- Personals where your biggest downfall man.

You a cry baby Bitch, Im screamin Fukk this little sob/
Whats the matter Jive turkey? I just said you sukked a little cokk// (This started over him bitchin bout me sayin he sukks dikk, Watch Semi Pro)
PUN-0, F-0, P-1, M-.5, E-0, T- 1.5/5
Faggots Rhymes is Bunk, He Thinkin hes Chronic? take that stuff back-
Now Watch me 'BURN GREEN QUICK' Like a "DRIED UP DUB SACK"
PUN-1, F-.5, M-1, P-1, E-1, T- 4.5/5
How Could i Leave Leeroi 'Green With Envy', When hes turnin 'Yellow' Gradually/
This Bitch Will Never 'Graduate', The Faggots Forever in 'The Acadamy'//
PUN-1, F-1, P-1, M-0, E-1, T- 4/5
Fukk Your Avy, I got this 'Dragons Balls' and he's soon-to-die/ (Chekk His Sig)
You're weak, Your 'Sayians' Aint 'SUPER', everyone 'boo-da-guy'// (Sayins/budaki)
PUN-1, F-1, P-1, M-1, E-1, T- 5/5
You Fukkin with an 'XL'son, You Just A Half Pint Tryna brawl-
This kid aint a 'Heavy Weight', I Leave 'LG' Feelin 'Small'-
PUN-.5, F-.5, P-.5, M-0,E-0, T- 1.5/5
Ya Wack-Raps couldnt 'Blast bad luck' if they were 'Black-Cats' With Lit Fuses/ ( Fire Crackers/Supersition of Crossin Black cats)
Catch Daps? stand back, I'll Fukkin sock your wack ass till your bruisin -
PUN-1, F-.5, P-0, M-1, E-1, T- 3.5/5
I could Convict-Him Offa A dic-tum, This is my house, watch me evict-him-
Then Leave This 'Asshole Scarred For life' Like a 'Butt Rape Victem'-
PUN-1, F-1, P-0, M-.5, E-1, T- 3.5/5
I'll Cripple this kid, Watch his 'Body Decay' When I 'Gank-Green'/(Gangrene)
Kid your Not even 'Semi Hard' Call this kat a 'Lame Wet Dream//
PUN-.5, F-1, P-.5, M-0, E-0, T- 2/5
My punches hit you hard as shit and knock you off balance/
Witness me 'skin your crew alive', you can call that 'raw Talent'//
PUN-1, F-1, P-0, M-.5, E-1, T- 3.5/5
Alrighty then, you came at him real good pest, id say your biggest downfall is the ability to not follow your own rules lol (24 bars), you had a couple misses, but overall pretty good material. So your sum is 29/60. A couple more bars could have sealed the deal man.

L-31/60,P-29/60
Based on scores, MVGT Leeroi Green. Good battle both of you, too bad one has to leave for two weeks. Sig idea is a nice one though.

Punches= DRAW
Flow= Leeroi
Personals= Pest
Multies=DRAW
Wordplay=Pest
Enjoyment= Pest


Vote : Pest

Dope Battle Very Close.....Leeroi Good Job Setting The Tone... But Pests Answering Verse Was a Lil Bit More Personal with Better Wordplay. IMO

Punches= Leeroi
Flow= Leeroi
Personals= Pest
Multies=DRAW
Wordplay=Pest
Enjoyment= Leeroi

I could sum up the rest or this text in one breathe, fuck pest/
if the maggot wasn't faggot he'd instantly suck less/

WEAK OPENER.

pest couldnt make a flo-ride if all he lived off was crest/
spend your whole life and never get the scent of dick off ya breathe/

NAH.

fuck boy you fuck boys but then what else is you gon do/
you wouldnt have a shot at pussy filming moulan rouge/

LOL. THIS WAS SICK.

and heres another fact of life the ILL will move on soon/
and remember pest as wearing dresses playing to wong foo/

NOPE.

this aphid bitch is faking sick he thinks he fancy saying nigga/
dont get mad that when i catch him i'm a have to smack a ginger/

NO.

this is a man to gnat collision what the hell has dude been sniffin/
you dont have the bars mak laz in alcatraz couldnt help you be a prison/

NEGATIVE.

you took the wrong approach you need to flea before you're ticked off/
i 'll rid you like the sitcom the black flag you gotta spoon to get your kicks off/

HUH?

i'll kill you with basics, sicks shots smoking barrel thats ILL fumigation/
if you're gassed up i'll strike a match and thats ILL lumination/

YES. FILTHY!

no magic a flick of the wrist is to blame for blain's disappearing/
and i aint talkin cards and candy when i say i'll lift his spirit/

DOPE!

to kill a pest a small step he'll get sent to heaven early/
meaning i could win hands down and i aint dissin s3v3n th1rty/

COOL. HANDS DOWN IS PLAYED THOUGH. BUT PERONSAL WAS NICE.

your shit wouldnt bang in the trunk as the D.C sniper/
you'd just get ate up like a deceased spider/

NO.

and as promised pest will leave in embarrassment/
as far as ILL goes its prophecy that m33k will inherit it/

NO.






You a cry baby Bitch, Im screamin Fukk this little sob/
Whats the matter Jive turkey? I just said you sukked a little cokk// (This started over him bitchin bout me sayin he sukks dikk, Watch Semi Pro)

NO. BAD.

Faggots Rhymes is Bunk, He Thinkin hes Chronic? take that stuff back-
Now Watch me 'BURN GREEN QUICK' Like a "DRIED UP DUB SACK"

PLAYED. NEEDA B MORE ORIGINAL THAN GREEN/BUD LINES.

How Could i Leave Leeroi 'Green With Envy', When hes turnin 'Yellow' Gradually/
This Bitch Will Never 'Graduate', The Faggots Forever in 'The Acadamy'//

COULDA BEEN GOOD, BUT THE ENDING SUCKED.

Fukk Your Avy, I got this 'Dragons Balls' and he's soon-to-die/ (Chekk His Sig)
You're weak, Your 'Sayians' Aint 'SUPER', everyone 'boo-da-guy'// (Sayins/budaki)

NOT BAD.

You Fukkin with an 'XL'son, You Just A Half Pint Tryna brawl-
This kid aint a 'Heavy Weight', I Leave 'LG' Feelin 'Small'-

BETTER.

Ya Wack-Raps couldnt 'Blast bad luck' if they were 'Black-Cats' With Lit Fuses/ ( Fire Crackers/Supersition of Crossin Black cats)
Catch Daps? stand back, I'll Fukkin sock your wack ass till your bruisin -

FLOW WAS DOPE. PUNCH SUCKED BIG FOOTS DICK.

I could Convict-Him Offa A dic-tum, This is my house, watch me evict-him-
Then Leave This 'Asshole Scarred For life' Like a 'Butt Rape Victem'-

LOL WTF. NO. FUNNY, BUT NO.

I'll Cripple this kid, Watch his 'Body Decay' When I 'Gank-Green'/(Gangrene)
Kid your Not even 'Semi Hard' Call this kat a 'Lame Wet Dream//

LOL AGAIN. FUNNY. NOT HARD HITTING THOUGH..

My punches hit you hard as shit and knock you off balance/
Witness me 'skin your crew alive', you can call that 'raw Talent'//

DECENT. I LIKED IT.


PEST UR VERSE WAS WAS AVERAGE. U COULDA CAME MUCH HARDER.
GREEN, U WAS AIIGHT. I THINK U WON THIS BATTLE CUZ UR PUNCHES WERE BETTER.. AND UR METAS MADE MORE SENSE..

VOTE: Lgreen

aight ... well Leeroi was pretty focused on gay slurs for half of his rhyme so I didn't like that he didn't switch up topics in this battle..its like throwin right jabs the entire fight, gotta mix it up...

"Ya Wack-Raps couldnt 'Blast bad luck' if they were 'Black-Cats' With Lit Fuses" -- liked that bar, very creative.

Pest did a good job of hittin with different styles and wordplay. I got it registered in my mind that he went out and called me a clown on the Shoutbox which is only gonna come back to bite em in the ass, but....

he took this one.

Vote: Pest

Punches=Leeroi had more lines and more punches some of pests stuff hit hard but he just didnt give himself enough opportunities
Flow= Leeroi was a lil more steady
Personals= Pest nuff said
Multies= leeroi-very close all 24 bars lined up 4 leeroi but pest missed 2 (tryna brawl & feelin small...also Gank Green and Wet dream)
Wordplay= pest
Enjoyment= Draw

wow both were good pest you wouldve taken punches for me if you had at least 4 more bars ...

MVGT...Leeroi

nice battle broz,
Punches- LG
Flow- LG
Personals-Pest
Multies-LG
Wordplay-Pest
Enjoyment- tie
MVGT LeeroiGreen

Aaaahhhahahah wtf, I just did a huge breakdown of this where did it go?!
MOTHER FUCKER!

Alright, I'm just doing the categories now...

Punches: Leeroi (punches were about tied in quality but Leeroi had 3 more bars.)
Wordplay: Tie
Nameplay: Tie
Personals: Pest (I thought his personals hit a little harder.)
Multies: Leeroi
Flow: Leeroi


Leeroi's flow was consistent throughout. There were a few places where I think Pest could've tightened his up but his was good for the most part, too. If he had a few more multies he probably could've tied both those categories. Pest had some nice personals but not enough to compete with the fact that he had three fewer bars. I think my original breakdown of 5 points per bar had it at Leeroi: 33/60 and Pest 27/45 meaning if he had come with those extra three bars he probably could've got this or at least it would've been much much closer. Punches were about tied in quality but not in quantity.

+1 Leeroi Green

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