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Life is short but death ain't a tall order/
So when its time to pass, you gotta move that ball forward/
Scoot or crawl toward yer goals, keep your patience grounded/
You'll be safe and sound, every wall has a way around it/
you can't bathe in fountains to maintain your younger days/
My heart is heavy but I still feel like its under weight/
The hunger pains of loneliness, so many people craving love/
That they over indulge then wonder why they're breaking up/
There's a pace to keep, I know yall can't wait to eat/
So inpatient like love is cake and the world won't save your piece/
Just say grace and breathe... Savor the taste, its sweet...
Yes my heart has a vacancy but I'm waiting for someone to make a key...
Cuz I threw away the last one, confused pain with passion... These chicks invade with blades like some trained assassins/
This is off the dome, no edit, no time to think/
Spoken work, open heart, pried eyes, I won't try to blink/
Its a poseidon thing, I flow with the force of oceans/
A gorgeous moment, she made the key, well I guess the door is open/
Unless I slam it shut, won't let you damage or leave me bandaged up/
I can't stand a slut... Ok, one more fuck, goddammit, so much for manning up...

Chorus lol

Boogers in ya nostrils, butcherin Picasso/
Ya girl wants to get high so i took her to the cosmos/
Repeat 2x

My mind is at warp speed, tryin to plow thru this writers block/
Whether i write or not, a breath of fresh air is required to keep the fire hot/
So if yer inspired, watch these haters try to tie their knots/
They got it twisted, tryin to prevent me from acquirin a higher spot/
Feel like a tire shop the way ive been changin rubbers/
Goin insane wonderin if i should have replaced the others/
Oh well, ill just face the judge, grab a brush and paint another/
Perfect picture of life but these dark days ensure that my fate is covered/
Ive been thru pain and suffered, but i'll be damned if it slows me down/
You wont see frowns, misery loves company, thats why im lonely now/
Doin my own thing, spreadin the love better than a shotgun could/
And i havent lost anyone close this year... knock on wood/
I just put the page to my forehead, soakin the thoughts up/
This could be the best year of my life, but i suppose its a toss up/
Its in the top 28, ive lived a lot in such little time/
But hey, now ive got a wealth of topics when its time to scribble rhymes/

Juat some eh shit. Enjoy.

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My heart is heavy but I still feel like its under weight/


Feel like a tire shop the way ive been changin rubbers/


Those lines really stood out to me. I liked the flow, the delivery, and how you presented it overall really. You're multi's were sick, as always. I liked how you brought the emotion thru on this one too. If I had to say I didnt like something, I would say how you kind of jump around a bit here and there, but it wasnt so much that it took away from the piece at all. Nice drop man, and glad to see you posting some shit up in the writtens. Keep it moving bro.

ill man.. really ill, very relatable but yet not a played subject which is always refreshing.. Old ruckas got the fire when it comes to multis.. really feeling the imagery, the feeling and the flow. this would be a dope audio

but on the real you were ruckas this whole time... shit man

keep shit like this coming, gives me fuel to write, and further belief in real hip hop

great multies nice concept..and good punches..nice similies and metaphores too...overall a great drop..props for this

Preciate the feed. Been a min so i thought id throw some shit up

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shit was dope man. pretty clean. flowed nice and was smooth. diggin the "every wall has its way around it".

Your flow is still dope Ruck nice flow on this
the whole vibe was nice, a different approach
a brutal honesty piece, crazy hook, but still dope man
keep writing!