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5 bars..24 hours..house rules..you know the deal..let's get it

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I'll De-ploy these-toys to de-stroy Leeroi
"POP" and "LOCK" this de-coy till he "BREAKS" like a "B-BOY"

I make STAR TREKS(tracks)like NE-MOY.You got "black hole rhymes"
They "SUCK"..does anyone else feel this ass-hole's lines?

Now you're "GREEN" with envy and "bottled up" like "REMY"
I'll leave you punch "drunk", Your a 4-banger,I'm a hemi.(4cylinder vs a hemi engine)

bLEEd ROI,you "clit", you don't belong here GREEN-go. (no offense)
You wouldn't be a "STAR" if your first name was "RINGO" (RINGO STAR)

Every time this fag enters a room they're like, "Who's he?"
You ain't no "BIG BOSS" my fluid punches will BRUISE LEE (bruce lee was in big boss).

heres a "deathnote" you about to take this L i'm Light Yagami nah i'm shinigami/
ya type bothers me ya write awkwardly you a weenie, dog i'll sweeny todd G/

you that 4/20 pretendo toke everybody knows mr grim gets indo smoked/
that shits no joke cus its no laughing matter when you're nintendo broke/

you really a fag G if you think you got this win then you silly as canned string/
you a laugh grim you wouldnt have a hit if you had billy and mandy/

I know you very well you spell like you barely twelve you're scared as hell/
and the only thing grims known for is his fairy tail/

so tell your closet bye bye cus its out that you like guys/
and you try to rhyme tight cus you heard it might get you 5 mikes/

EASY

i think both of you only had 2 or 3 bars even worth posting
i dont think i saw ANY punches worth a shit
i think Grim spends too much energy focusing on wordplay
its only one category. I'd rather just hear some clean rhymes
i have to read a back story in parenthesis for all your rhymes grim
its too much work. if anything put the references at the end

you should both be DQ'd for not tryin hard enough and makin me read this

flow Leeroi
rhymes even
wordplay goes to grim but too much is too much
multies Leeroi
enjoyment Leeroi


but to me this was a dead heat.

i gotta go with Leeroi for flow and ease of reading.

MVGT Leeroi

Flow- grim
Punches-green( with the billy and mandy bar)
Wordplay-grim
Mulities-tie
Enjoyment- grim

MVGT- Grim

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Flow-Grim
Mulities-Grim
Enjoyment-Lee
Personals-Grim
Wordplay-Grim

This was kinda close for me. Grims structure made his rhyme way easier to understand and that's why every category he took by a narrow margin. Lee if you could build a similar structure like that we all could understand your rhymes better yo. Not bad, but I couldn't tell how good...ya feel me? Same advice I need. No hate just love.

MVGT:Grim

2-1 upping for votes to close