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Young Trell vs Grim (Grim wins KO)

Posted: Thu Apr 21, 2011 1:31 am
by Grim
ok house rules..no flipping..5 bars(10 lines)...24 hour due time from check

Re: Young Trell vs Grim

Posted: Thu Apr 21, 2011 2:30 am
by Young Trell
Check homey...

5 bars...thats it... cool... done in an hour...

Re: Young Trell vs Grim

Posted: Thu Apr 21, 2011 3:12 am
by Grim
It's a "420" battle..let me "pass" you this "L" (BLUNT/LOSS)
Be "blunt" with my delivery and crack me a "RELL" (cigarello/Trell)

What the "TRELL" were you thinking excepting this battle?
I raise the "steaks" when there's "beef".I'm dissecting this "cattle"

You just "follow the herd" while I "lead the pack"
Face down on the "railroad" is the only way you should"breath on tracks"

YOUNG punk against a grown MAN? You're "soft" like a "slow jam"
Your skills won't help you "hang" with me but I bet this "rope" can.

My "eagle" will have ya seeing "stars".My mind-STATE is GOLDEN.
Grim's a "raider" of souls and that's what T-RELL's OWEN. (owing/terell owens)

expos:Terell Owens played for the Eagles,Raiders,Cowboys=stars,and 49ers=golden state/california/san fransisco 49ers

Re: Young Trell vs Grim

Posted: Thu Apr 21, 2011 5:29 am
by Young Trell
Sorry Im at work... hate my fuckin job...

They call you grim, well you know you reap what you sew;
"Sew" it "seems" you get killed wit this "thread" just for show;
Though im new to life here, I still dont fear a reaper;
Im dien to kill death, what a hell of a teaser…lol
You named yo self after that which takes lives;
But acceptin this battle was complete suicide; dummy
Funny thing is….people see you when they takin they last step;
They see me after they breathe out they last breath;
Therefore im god, and you’re a worn down shoe;
I make music…no point in wastin anymore bars on you;

Re: Young Trell vs Grim

Posted: Thu Apr 21, 2011 5:47 am
by Moneymaker
Alright this was a decent battle

Flow-grim
Wordplay-grim
Nameplay-grim
Mulities-tie
Enjoyment-grim

MVGT- Grim. He won every cat. Young would have won if he would show us wear his bars started and ended

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Re: Young Trell vs Grim

Posted: Thu Apr 21, 2011 5:58 am
by king nep
this is hw you cast a decent vote grim...

It's a "420" battle..let me "pass" you this "L" (BLUNT/LOSS)
Be "blunt" with my delivery and crack me a "RELL" (cigarello/Trell)

1/5 wasnt feelin it

What the "TRELL" were you thinking excepting this battle?
I raise the "steaks" when there's "beef".I'm dissecting this "cattle"

Dissecting cattle this was lame 1/5

You just "follow the herd" while I "lead the pack"
Face down on the "railroad" is the only way you should"breath on tracks"

universal not really a diss but flow was nice an concept 2.5/5

YOUNG punk against a grown MAN? You're "soft" like a "slow jam"
Your skills won't help you "hang" with me but I bet this "rope" can.

this was hot 3.5/5

My "eagle" will have ya seeing "stars".My mind-STATE is GOLDEN.
Grim's a "raider" of souls and that's what T-RELL's OWEN. (owing/terell owens)

name flip not bad structure was bit off 2.5/5

10.5/30

They call you grim, well you know you reap what you sew;
"Sew" it "seems" you get killed wit this "thread" just for show;

decent punch 2/5

Though im new to life here, I still dont fear a reaper;
Im dien to kill death, what a hell of a teaser…lol

funny 2.5/5

You named yo self after that which takes lives;
But acceptin this battle was complete suicide; dummy

didnt hit hard for me 1/5

Funny thing is….people see you when they takin they last step;
They see me after they breathe out they last breath;

also not doing it just lame 1/5

Therefore im god, and you’re a worn down shoe;
I make music…no point in wastin anymore bars on you;

God an shoes huh no man lame 1/5

7.5/30

both guys came off soft

mvgt grimmm

Re: Young Trell vs Grim

Posted: Thu Apr 21, 2011 11:58 am
by leeroi green
i liked both verses no front but im a go with grim cleaner punches more sting but i enjoyed rells a lot but grim got the cats

Re: Young Trell vs Grim

Posted: Thu Apr 21, 2011 2:36 pm
by Kuhlerblynd
Thread closed and records updated.

Grim wins KO.