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Fuck you biatch!!!!!!

5bars and dont no show me motherfucka!
house rules applies

you know the deal cocksucker

Yea you an ultimate shit talk master. too bad yer iNEPt at bein a battler
Now go look that word up you illiterate bastard

Ya avy is just wrong, look more like King Kong with goggles
Your rhymes are extinct i'm about to exume your fossils

You tha gorilla in the missed....cause you aint landed one verse
Im vanilla in this bitch. A creamy makin ya feelins get hurt

Knockin ya dick in tha dirt. If you fuckin had one
You finna catch a bad one from Mack "The Son" , Laz aint done

Nothin but NEPotism up in here votin for your bretheren
Illest a bunch a girlish bitches and you the Queen Nef of em

*Nefertiti
*Mack means "son"

You picked the wrong cat to fuck wit Biatchhhhh!!!!

Check the bluepint spit Mack lazarus cockeyed to be inspired to flow squint//
Im deadly hazar-DIZZ an this kids practice is to set a light from a used flint
So your guess is as good as mine his really dumb an stoop-id//

Watch me maul an jack mack in his studio wit a water pistol gun//
Just to show the amount of effort it takes to beat this bum//

Run home open the door heartsore weak in the knees an numb//
On a real, your a cocksucker tasting my dick when kissing yo mum//

Dumb fuck ! you should have ducked i'll bet you a hundred bucks//
This DISS got de hole forum in chuckles an yo fans screaming Lazarus sucks//

Out of luck, Fuck this hobo! bet his thinking of deleting his own flow//
Closest you ever getting to me is giving away my cd at my first promo//


Lets see where this goes voters lets get it....

neither verse was very hard but MACK gets flow/structure,wordplay/nameplay was good too and Mack gets punches for me just because his had SOME intrecate parts where he did the wordplay...both came at the other but Nep's verse sounded waaay too basic and every line was played out...although Nep did make me laugh....I feel Mack put together a better more complex verse so...

MVGT: MACK

i thought complexity messes up a battle cause u gonna need alot expos..

go ask leeroi lol but thanks fo voting

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uppin fo votes

-- Wed Apr 20, 2011 5:03 pm --

-Punches- Neither really. Macks first bar and Neps last bar are the best outa the worst.
-Flow- Mack.... Nep, what is up with your first bar man
-Personals- Mack flipped the name a little more to get this one. Nothing real personnal outside of that tbh.
-Multies- Tie, @ weak
-Enjoyment- I honestly didnt enjoy either.

Cat tally says MVGT MACk

MVGT: Mack

Overall flow and enjoyment was the only thing to really consider here because as for the rest of the categories...where were they?