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about fuckin time. I see why they call you Demo
Cause shit never gets finished. You a joke like Jay Leno

you better check my call or the wrecking ball is gonna deck ya halls
but not like that fat dude. Macks rude when he jacks your crew

this is a controlled explosion. no, an implosion a well orchestrated motion
turnin metal molten mother fucker and foldin your infrastructure

A well planned demolition from a manned position. so if you can, listen
cause Mack the knife is gonna slice like Ronco demos kitchens

first you choose a word. then usually a verb.
Next you read how i lyrically flip the bird

hold it up high and fly it when i write it
Sit tight and watch all the writers bite it

Calculate what i'm about to state. Then Kill the fake when i illustrate
Highlight my point as i light my joint. Then kick this song while i rip my bong

When i get near the end its like a bitter sweet emotion
But never fear my friend its just means demos done

-- Fri Apr 22, 2011 11:09 am --

reminder to Demo+

Ok'
Master'd Ya Demise.. Clashin Was Unwise Uppercut Have U In Tha Ceilin Wit Plaster In Ya Eyes
This Bastard In Disguise.. Im Ill Read Ya Skills Dead.. Jesus Couldnt Get Lazarus To Rise

U Wash'd Up.. U Need A Rubber Duckie.. Go Get Erniee Or Marbe Jus Ah' Medic N Ah' Gurney
Edit Cuz U Bore Me.. U Suck.. On Ya Knees N If Mac Did Stand Up He'll Get Dead'd Like He's Bernie

Smash Ya Rhymes No Holdin Back.. Play D N You Wont Pass My Line If U Go For Sacks
So As I Scold This Wack Its Lookin Like Ah' Apple Notebook Tha Way Im Foldin' Mac

Shit.... I'll Twist You Up.. You Bitch Ass Fuck.. If Your Dope I'll Smoke You N Get Lift'd Up
Bring Beef To Tha Table N Get Zip Pot/Luck.. Rip Ya Heart Out.. Kill Tha Doc B4 Ya Shit Nip/Tuck'd




Screw Ya Crew I'll Have Semtex Attach'd To Faces Like Tumors
Fuck M.L, If He Was A King He'll Get Assassinated Like Junior

Imma Beast.. Dont Test Me.. My Marksmen Snipes Like Wesley
I'll Whip Ya Ass N MAke It Last For Ever Like Besties

I'll Own You Take It Back N Str8 Pwn You.. Imma Take Home This W Even If I Have To Clone U
Ya Verse Was Shitty N Its Smellin Kinda Strong Too.. Find A Loss in Secs Like U Search'd On Yahoo

If Your Trippin I'll Split Ya.. Now Its Steel In Tha Back Of Ya Head Like Hidden Agendas
Im High As Fuck So Trust Your Jus Waitin To Get Crush'd Like Tha Shit In Ya Picture
Yea

-- Wed Apr 27, 2011 12:04 pm --

Uppin

Not sure how this is a topical, and not a straight up battle. None the less,
MVGT Demo, his rhyme scheme at funnier lines sold it better, whatever it was. Mack, not a bad job, i just felt you had a couple more filler bars than he did. Demo, not bad at all man, but i think your 6th bar, is rather played already, just a caution.


MVGT DEMO+

I have no clue on what the point of this topical
Flow-Mack
Delivery-Demo
Mulities-neither that i could see
enjoyment-Demo

this was a ok battle MVGT-DEMO+

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Catsweep to Demo...

At first I though M.L. was gonna take the flow cat, but then I read Demo's verse and he took it...getting better everytime I read ya verses Demo...where's Mack been???

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