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Hey man this is an awesome beat. Very good choice. Hook is perfect. You definetly got a lil style on ur delivery man. You landed like 95% of ur flow. A couple parts here an there where u maybe could of deliverd it a bit different but dope regardless. You ride the beat real nice with good switchups within the flow. I like shit like that. The content is real. Im a fan of shit like this. You seemed to put a good amount of energy and emphasis on ur flow which is key to recording a solid verse. Production seemed fairly well. I was listenin to it on my phone so i may jus edit this post soon as i hear it in the car. Nice job tho man. Very nice track for ur mixtape

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i make you cry!!!! hahahaha nah man i couldnt listen to it... no headphones

but looks cool

Listenin....
Shit comes in nasty.... You better kill it....

Rose in the concrete blown by the wind....
Nice...
Shit is flowin... lyrics good... your voice is different as fuck...no diss..lol

Shit was decent... I think the beat saved you...naw... just fuckin wit ya... alotta cats woulda fucked this beat up but you spit real, anyone could tell yo shit was from the heart, no fear all emotion.... good shit.... im gon give it a 7.5/10...

Keep spittin... Wanna hear some more of that shit.

Holy fuck man, not what i was expecting from you, but to be honest, not really sure what i was expecting. Your style of writing is definitely unique man, props. Your voice sounds cool, tone wise that is. Sounds like some straight stabbing paper with aggression then recording it. I like this shit man, quality wise, could be better, but your fine man, lyrical content makes up for the quality flaws. Props mother fucker, jump on the mix tape loons organizing damn it.

thanks for the feedback guys, appreciate it

Good shit brah, I liked the beat and you kept it real with the lyrics..Keep it up!