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aaaaaaawww maaaaaaaaan!!!!
let it rock fellas

48 hours huh ok CHECKING IN

Making the deadline to thursday, got called in for work tomorrow so i cant record.

cool cool cachoo dude

-- Thu Apr 21, 2011 7:55 am --

i'm ready to drop man

-- Thu Apr 21, 2011 9:02 am --

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lyrics:
there will be no sound no audible thought
one blow he don't know his knowledge will stop
with no pause in his drop when he falls from the top
im the king of this spot bitch, like it or not
you a fag, ya probably shake ya ass when ya walk
you think out loud and get smashed in a box
where no one can hear you talk, or hoot and scream
you say your audible but you sound mute to me
people be like, Audible Thought, Who is he
probably those parts they found in the blue beneath
heard they found nothing but his shoes and feet
and ink on a sheet written by defiance
all they heard was something audible than it was silent
you aint fly.. you'd probably crash as a pilot
a product of violence, but his knuckles were weak
i'll cut your voice box and tell you to speak
you couldt sell on the streets with X or c.ds
you mom bought your tape and kept the receipt
claim to have a golden flow but that shit was cheap
you couldn't pay the fee if the price was free
you don't want to be fight-ing me that's an illusion
we cant be equal theres no math solution
i'll overload his thoughts causing mass confusion
its like a teacher coming through to smash his student
how can you be a rapper no ones played your music
audible couldn't spit, if i paid him to do it
you nothing but useless, so just face the facts
cause this aint a battle this is rape to rap
this is this the end i cant take it back
you steady thinking till i made this track
no play it back and take it one more time
FUCK AUDIBLE THOUGHT ILL BLOW HIS MIND

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Lyrics:
i guess its time to slap this wack amateur
recording his death, like a murderer's camera
its apparent, that ur parents aint raised u right
did ur daddy ever tell you when and who to a pick a fight with
i guess not cuz you fucking with a beast
the devil on my shoulder took off the leash
you a bitch, a fake you think you're that good
to be calling out loon you've been misinformed
you're as dope as a rehab clinic no more
beating you is easier than pickin up a drunk whore
better hope, i dont come knocking on ur door
strangle you, with ur own guitar chord's(uses guitars in his instrumentals)
i leave you, on the floor nobody will know
til i burn ur house down with this firey flow
you're a rookie, you'll never be defying a pro
go ahead and push me, if u wanna see the unknown
hold-up i think im puttin in too much effort
i dont have to try to kill defiance on a record
i guess i live it for the music leave it all on the table
this is my life for him its just a fucking fable
the only thing defiance is definin, is dinner for a lion
a toothpick for this giant burn em like some iodine on these cuts
i dont give a fuck self destruct in his face
this is his murder case

nice battle..flow and delivery went to defiance..creativity and quality go to auidable thought......multies were better from defiance to me..this was a close battle for me...neither really had super punches but solid from both..

Mvgt: defiance

Defiance:
I enjoyed the beat, but the original rapper was a bit better lol. I like how you addressed this one in rap form, a lot more aggressive than anything else I've heard you do, so thumbs up. Your adlibs are a little girly man to be honest. I see what you where trying to do, but you addressed them as adlibs, making your tone higher so it stands out, but try doing it at normal tone like your rap, and lower the track volume and pan... might be able to pull it off better. Your clipping a lot also... So quality is not all that great, but its good enough to be understood. There weren't a whole lot of personals, so this track can almost be aimed at anyone. Your flow is getting better, rough in some patches, like your stretching a word to make it fit, or breathing a long time lol, but i have the same problem. Because you came more aggressive, your rap sounded better delivered, so props.

Audible Thought:
Your flow is unique man, some Flobots style stuff where it doesn't all have to rhyme in the same spot. Cool shit, only place you fumbled a little was at the very end. The verse as a whole, in my opinion, didn't have the battle feel to it. I think it lacked the aggression that exists in a fight. I don't really see a problem with your quality, it seemed your vocals were a little low, but that might just be my speakers. The personals and punches weren't all that great, a few here and there. Beat selection was different to say the least lol. The biggest thing i see as a downer is the tone or emotion you used. Its a story telling tone when you should be ripping someones head off lol.

So it goes like this:

-Delivery- Defiance.
-Punches- Defiance, the aggression brought them out more.
-Consistency- Defiance
-Breath Control- Audible
-Flow- Audible
-Quality- Audible
-Personal- Audible had 2 lol
-Enjoyment- Defiance


DAMN



BEAR with me...



Ok



So there has to be a winner. Just on listen alone, MVGT Defiance. Simply because yes they tied in cats, but defiance came to the table with the right type of track, Audibles tone and lack of aggression lost it for me. Good match up to be honest. Nice battle, and thank you both for showing up lol.

2-0 uppin

hmmm audible got this IMO

I'm a fan of the Gorillaz and this was reminiscent of them

They both had their strengths and in different ways

both had lots of good stuff but

-Delivery- A
-Punches- D
-Consistency- A
-Breath Control- A
-Flow- A
-Quality- A
-Personal- D
-Enjoyment- A



MVGT Audible

damn you mack..... 2-1 upping

Wowwww......Ok So Here's How I See It. . .

Defiance:
You Had An Aggressive Energy Throughout Your Whole Verse, This Aided In The Battle Environment, Which Is Good. Your Multis And Punches Are Nice, Some Decent Name Flips. One Thing, Work On Your Delivery, It Seemed Like You Were Leaving Too Much Empty Space Between Your Lines, And Mid-Bar. You Really Should Either Add Additional Words To Some Bars, Or Work On Breath Control So They Don't Sound Choppy.

Audible:
Fam, I Just Really Felt Like You Didn't Approach This With A Battle Mindset. Your Vocals Were Too Calm/Relaxed, And Your Verse Really Didn't Seem Aggressive Towards Your Opponent. Another Flaw, Is You Would Spit One Bar That Ended In One Rhyme, And The Next Bar Would End In A Complete Different Rhyme. I Personally Am Not A Fan Of That Style. You Started Off Weak, And When You Reached The "fiery flow, denying a pro" Rhyme Scheme, I Thought You Were Going To Switch Up To A Bunch Of Multi-Murders!!! But I Was Sadly Disappointed Bro. Work On That Ok Man?

Overall, Both Emcees Had Their Flaws, But Only One Can Come On Top. . .My Vote Goes To Defiance. Decent Battle Though. . .

3-1 upping for more votes

My vote goes to voting failure