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Yo the rules

House Cats
-flow
-delivery
-Punches
-personals
-Overall enjoyment


The Battle includes
No Beat Preference
2 Verses including Chorus
no time limit

but keep it with in a respected 3:00 minutes

due with in a week from the Check ins

This is my check

Checkity check checkaroo

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so shits due no later than the 20th

Thats swell

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-- Sun Apr 17, 2011 5:38 pm --

Ill be ready by tonight nancy. Lemme kno whats the haps

here it is man
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let me know if we need to post lyrics
uppin

well...I have to say this was a decent battle..both had some good lines...both had solid flow but Loon's flow was better and his confidence and projection was stronger...defiance had some good shit but loon's verse was more complete...personals tie..punches loon...flow..loon...enjoyment loon...delivery..loon..overall a decent battle but for me it was fairly one sided..respect to both

MVGT: Loon

Yo, off the bat, good job both of uz. But I'ma be honest... Defiance, you dropped a beter track than against me, but it still sounds like your progressing. Loon, sounds like your there, comfortable.

-flow- For obvious reasons, loon.
-delivery- Loon again, the method of flow with the paced delivery made everything work nicely.
-Punches- Loon, to be honest, defi, i had trouble keeping up with yours, the fillers sounded identical to the punches, so i found myself trying to connect more than just sitting back and "oh".
-personals- Loon - Other than calling him a midget, nothing really stood out from defi.
-Overall enjoyment- Loon - Mad funny, the confidence behind the track took it all together.


Big ups to both of you, but Lou get my vote.


Defi, definitely a better drop, it just seems like your trying to jam a lot, which i do as well lol. I'm also not sure if you know if your a rapper or a singer. Sometimes i hear a nice merge of both, other times, its like you think you should rap it, but lets sing it cuz it might sound better. know what i mean? nice drop though.

2-0 uppin. And btw im 5'11 which is actually not a midget at all. Just a lil 411

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big up on both cats audio is really the way to go cause you can hear where each cats coming from...

here my breakdown

flow... defiance had a decent flow but felt forced as hell in certain places loone is a vet at making sure he dont cram everything into one jar bar so flow is loon
delivery... flow an delivery is same bench mark if flow is messed delivery will come off softer so as above loone take it there
Punches... both of use did a decent job and in my opinion its a tie use had me giggling lol
Personals.... to be honest both of use werent at your best wit personals so its a no vote
Overall enjoyment... loones verses had me rockin in my chair defiance i was like 40 sec in then lost interest but i think loons beat had alot of influence in this catergory

mvgt loon keep droppin audios

damn another knock out close this shit