Deeper Than My Thoughts Can Get

[lyrical1]

http://soundcloud.com/lyrical1/deeper-t ... oughts-can

quality still that issue

All She Wrote Instrumental

[Loon E Lou]

maaaaan i cant see how this is gettn slept on. this is a nice piece. beats ill of coarse. you got a mad flow dawg! very on point, and flawless for the most part. the hook could be turnt up a lil bit. production is actually pretty decent. you got nice lyrics, and you know how to deliver em. your ride the shit out of the beat. i like how you bounce with the snares. iunno what else to say other than i hope to hear a lil more from you.

[lyrical1]

preciate the props. ima try to check out you and other cats tracks when i get a chance.

[Livenlearn]

I like it Lyrical, your flow is on point...I really wishd it was mixed well because ur content is on point, and keep up with the visual lines and imagery because that adds a lot to the song...Watch out for the breath control because, I can tell ur losing breath at times, but overall good work

[lyrical1]

^thx for the feed back and props sir

[Audible Thought]

flows on point and the vocab is good, but the quality really hurts the song. invest in like a $100 mic and you'll hear great improvement

[lyrical1]

^true, i got one that needs phantom power, i might just need a new cable for or somthing cuz it aint workin. Down the road ima get another one anyways.

And yeah, the hook needs to be higher, this was kinda of a quick transfer to cd, i didnt focus on the mix down as much as I shouldve.