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House rules,
48 hours due from check,
5-8 bars,
This is my check.

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No one's "feeling" you Malik you apply "MEEK" pressure.
I'll beat this JOKER "dead" with a BAT MAN..Heath Ledger.

You keep acting "squirrley" I'll get "grizzly"..you can't "bear" my verse.
I'll leave you buried in dirt so this "MEEK" can "inherit the Earth"

You couldn't "trump" my verse with a hand full of "spades".
You couldn't "blow up" with a hand full of "hand grenades".

I'm coming at you like "A bat out of Hell"..call me Meatloaf.
This game is "Blood in Blood out" so I'm burying MEEK-lo. (meek low)

Battling Meek is like throwing fists with a "pacifist"..
You have-no-"hits"..The only "bombs you dropped" is when you had-to-shit!

It’s FUCK the AFTER LIFE,
I’ll take his life and not think TWICE,
My flow is HADES RIVER nice/
You couldn’t TRY to WRITE the price/

So I’ll dice him with the scythe,
And slice him like 11 times, THRICE…!/ (33)
2 battles later,
and your verse is STILL lacking signs of life/

For me it ain’t a plight,
I brighten up the grimmest light/
Ill turn your bars to bombsites,
And tell MURK, “Truth is this dude GHOST WRITES”/

Even your best rhyme is a re-write,
I smite emcees you couldn’t beat this black knight/
My bars is sin,
You couldn’t win if your name was ‘KILLA-MIC’/

your bars is bud-like,
WEEDing, but you still don’t SMOKE RIGHT/
My bars is MEEKISH/
so the grim bars, THEY CAN’T BE GOD-LIKE!/

yo this shits close

edging towards Grimm at first his verse was technically more advanced


but than meeks shit had me bobbing my head and laughing at grimms expense

which is more to me than some well thought shit


but when i counter balance the two

i go with M33k


You guys were tied in everything cept for "complexity- GRimm" and "Enjoyment and flow- M33k"

Gotta go with the persons verse i was feeling more

enjoyment-m33
flow-m33
complexity-grimm
nameplay-grimm
mulities-tie
wordplay-m33
structure-grimm

MVGT-Grimm. it was a good battle but grimm just got my vote with that last bar

enjoyment-M33K
flow-Grimm
complexity-Grimm
nameplay-Grimm
mulities-Grimm
wordplay-M33K
structure-Grimm

MVGT=Grimm

2-1 you grimm

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2-1 check

GRIMM

No one's "feeling" you Malik you apply "MEEK" pressure.
I'll beat this JOKER "dead" with a BAT MAN..Heath Ledger.
It was decent... But you hit your Metaphor like you were part of young money or something... irritating
You keep acting "squirrley" I'll get "grizzly"..you can't "bear" my verse.
I'll leave you buried in dirt so this "MEEK" can "inherit the Earth"
good wordplay and nameplay
You couldn't "trump" my verse with a hand full of "spades".
You couldn't "blow up" with a hand full of "hand grenades".
Thats was gay...
I'm coming at you like "A bat out of Hell"..call me Meatloaf.
This game is "Blood in Blood out" so I'm burying MEEK-lo. (meek low)
Coulda been better
Battling Meek is like throwing fists with a "pacifist"..
You have-no-"hits"..The only "bombs you dropped" is when you had-to-shit!
drop bomb/shit lines are played.

It’s FUCK the AFTER LIFE,
I’ll take his life and not think TWICE,
My flow is HADES RIVER nice/
You couldn’t TRY to WRITE the price/
wheres the punch meek??
So I’ll dice him with the scythe,
And slice him like 11 times, THRICE…!/ (33)
2 battles later,
and your verse is STILL lacking signs of life/
creative but still lacks a punch to me man.
For me it ain’t a plight,
I brighten up the grimmest light/
Ill turn your bars to bombsites,
And tell MURK, “Truth is this dude GHOST WRITES”/
best bar so far from you
Even your best rhyme is a re-write,
I smite emcees you couldn’t beat this black knight/
My bars is sin,
You couldn’t win if your name was ‘KILLA-MIC’/
HAHA thats iight
your bars is bud-like,
WEEDing, but you still don’t SMOKE RIGHT/
My bars is MEEKISH/
so the grim bars, THEY CAN’T BE GOD-LIKE
Okay Closer...

Man it was pretty close... this battle wasnt amazing or nothing but it was decent...

Ima have to give it to grimm tho man...
His shit hit just a tiny bit harder and i caught his flow a lil more...

MVGT GRIMM

3-1 you grimm.

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flo-w tie
-punches grim
creativity-grim

mvgt_grim

4-1..TKO win for me

Thread Closed & Records Updated

Grim wins via TKO 4-1