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House rules,
Due 48 hours after check,
How many bars you want?
And this is my check.

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6 is good.. check

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-- Sun Apr 10, 2011 3:52 am --

They say ignorance is bliss n M 33 don't know he getting the death Kis,
Get grizzy on this meek kid, spit fire n light em like a funeral for vikings,

Let em spit his feeble bullshit while I full clips,
put 33 shots in M n watch the K make his body split,

Have his coof cave in like the metrodome, I step to Holmes,
He couldn't figure something to say if Sherlock wrote his poems,

When m33k's mom find his body its murder she wrote,
N if I go further m33k chokes, I'm cold blooded to the bloke,

He's a fucking joke with no punchline, so he flunked rhymes,
You about to Watch s3v3n KIck SHit in his eyes 33 fucking times,

Yeah leave bitch blind like poker, but I "hold em in Minnesota ",
Spit so many lyrical bullets dude will dance a motherfucking polka,

You know its funny,
Cause your name is the time I get off my job/
While I'm making money,
You jerk off and play 'black ops', 'money shots'/

That bar was like a filler,
True for my part, your's was realer/
'Time' to 'fix' this nigga, stop watch,
Clocked with '2 hands', punchlines 'time killers'/

I was thrilled at the chance,
To put this out of date bitch in his place/
I'm just 'pacing' this 'race',
Seven might show up a bit 'late', his 'time' is so out of 'shape'/

Happy hour has ended,
30 minutes later your the 'spittin' image/
All your bars look like,
You had a thought while you were drunk, but couldn't finish/

Your name can't last,
60 seconds in the game leaves you 'slim fast'/
7:30s just the time,
When you realised in every situation you came last/

This is a battle,
Hurry and post, I ain't got 'time' to sit back,
'48' hours after the fact,
Seven will just post his 6 bars, all of them reading "im wack"/

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-- Sun Apr 10, 2011 2:56 am --

Dammit!!! I was tryna post mines first!!!! Now its just ALL fucked up..........

this battle was decent..nothing really stood out for me..you both had some nice concepts or set ups but the punches didn't quite get there...7:30's punches were off..they didn't quite hit for me...Meek had some decent wordplay in spots and had some decent and solid pnches but seem like meek had some wasted lines and so did 7:30...set up punch, set up punch,ect,ect...you guys had decent lines though no disrespect but on this site the bar is pretty high for expectations with some of the talent here.....when i read meeks four lines as two lines it flowed better for me.....
Mvgt:K33Kish

everything Grim said.. can i vote tie?

MVGT S3V3N to me, his were cleaner and easier to read
His set ups were smooth and resolved with better rhymes

IMO








"Don't waste pixels on Wack Words" ML

Close, but meek had the adavantage with word play and I felt his flo a lil mo.
MVGT: M33Kish

Aiite 2-1 m33

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