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A track by ,Vmac dubs, (that I got from uloops.
I tried making the transition between bars smoother, (since it only let's my record 4 bars at a time), it didn't really work...

But as always feedback from audio heads is always appreciated, especially if you know any tips or tricks for recording.

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that u nigga??

Nah my cuzzin Monte ray.... lol

YA!!!

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not bad...the vocal volume needs to be adjusted and work on smoothing out your anuncition to make the words clearer..the bass drowned out your lyrics...not bad though and it sounded like you rode the beat pretty weel so nice drop overall...work on sound quality and you'll be straight

The beat sounds very original lol. Hmm, i'll be completely honest with you, Your more consistent, but i still hear you reading this. Its a very repetitive ride with your flow, no emotion, no switch ups, just constant. Try pausing some, let me soak some lyrics up before you spit some more. WRITE to the beat, instead of structuring shit out maybe? Its decent man, quality aside, but i cant help but picturing you in front of your paper just reading hoping you don't run out of breath. Sorry took me so long to get back to you btw, i have issues lol.

Lol no prob panda your feed is appreciated late as opposed to never lol. And Ima get off that damn reading sound if its the last thing I do!!!

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The production is pretty wild, the only thing that really threw me off about it was the "production tag" being repeated over and over throughout the song. I personally NEVERRR fuck with a beat with a production tag in it...even if it's the hottest thing I've ever heard. Tags ruin a song completely. End of story.
There's alot of wild vocal fluctuation going on in your tracks, so I'm not sure if it's the lack or mixing knowledge or the equipment that you use...but that definitely needs improvement.
Your flow falls off from time to time...it sounds like youre real fluid on some bars, and then others it seems like you try to cram too many words into a certain bar and it throws off the presentation.

...overall, it's a decent share, but this jawn can definitely use alot of polishing up! I give it a 5/10

Please return me some feed on...

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/say-f ... 21449.html

Thanks.

Ya I kinda am missing the production skills I need because I'm limited to programs I can only use on my phone but Ima keep working on it. Thanks for the advice about beats kurse, Ima definitely keep that in mind.

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yeah i thought this shit was cool man, sounds like a beat box beat which i like
the lyrics were tyte a lil mono toned. but good none the less.. i like it man

keep doing you

funny shit... good be somthin if if really gave it some more thought i think... it would be somethin id get on