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Richard

Posted: Sat Apr 09, 2011 8:08 am
by PatronMylan
Yeah, I look like Richard Pryor
Im always stayin wet & you hoes in need of a dryer.
A Louie vuitton bag, a Christian louboutin shoe,
You stay carrying coach;bitch im rocking Jimmy choo.
Ima bomb ass chick; Little B based Gods dick.
I got a swagger thru the roof,and im swaggin to won-ton soup.
And Im a genius; now someone go run and tell Venus.
Im on my Jimmy Neutron ish;
come at me,ill leave you brain dead just like a fish.
Poppin bottles'gin,goose,rozay,moscato,
Blowin all this money you would think I won the lotto.
Yes im yung; and yes im still in school.
Swag so dumb just take a look at my jewel,
And Yes bitch I rule.
Im the queen of this mafia;
Lyrically invested in the body theres no point of stoppin her.
Strip me down like some playboy bunnies,
And I can tell that Hugh Hefner is disgusted by dem old hunnies.
Im like the illest of the sickest;the sickest of the illest,
I can never be a fake cuz I am the muthafuckn realest.

Re: Richard

Posted: Sun Apr 10, 2011 1:48 pm
by M-Mature Boy
first girl i seen droppin on her. well u got some flow but could work on the rhyme scheme alittle more. it started off good but starting at "Yes im yung; and yes im still in school." u started getting a little simple. jus keep workin on ur skill and u'll improve. keep it up girl.