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G/L

chekkin in.
I vote all the time...
if you honestly want me to drop linnks i will

Check...

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/grimm ... 66-15.html

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/benny ... 21459.html

My Bars are 'tampax' leave em jamm pakked inside this crappy fag/
Aint No one "Catch Your flow", You A "Bitch without a Maxi Pad"//

You think you 'MAKE MOVEMENTS' but i see your 'STILL-IN-PLACE'/
'JACK' Defeat-me? This 'GAY' Weak-ling Needs Some 'WILL N GRACE'//

This is 'PESTILENCE', Spreadin 'EPIDEMICS' to 'INFECT EM'/
Win record? Fukk naw, Its how many dikks been in your Rectum//

You BITCH-MADE, i SPIT-FLAMES, This 'PUSSY' spittin 'EST-RO-GEN'/
I'll Erase Your 'ReMARKABLE' Style like You Wrote ya Lines With 'EX-PO PENS'//

You isnt shit-to-me, This battles his-to-ry, Putt you in mis-er-y/
Keep my spits clean like Lis-ter-ine, Then Jack Jack for the Vic-tor-y//

Murder scene, call tha ambulance

Yo

This Dudes a Wreck, punches like Obesity from tha shoulders up, you can lose ya neck
So Take the Views of Vets or tha crew you rep, They HUNGARY for a beatdown, so they BOO'D-Ah-PEST

Are you Confused or Stressed? Thats the Text of Rip, juss to leave tha Injured Bagged like a Medic Kit
But I'm checkin this, If that avy is Pest's Pic, than don't worry bout gettin Bodied, you clearly A HEAD of It

It's pathetic shit when ya Raps crushed wit ease, Got Pest Controlled but he neva Had buzz wit frees
Arythmatic, ya studio is a fact the public needs, I never Counted on finding it cos it didnt' ADD UP TO ME

So this kats touched wit heat, rushed & beat, Braggin' bout probation but thats ya life prick
Even tha feedback sucks when you type scripts when ya WRITES REMAIN SILENT kinda like tha Knife shit

Tha nice spits patronize kidds to bite Rip's, but thats nothin new to touch on like tha breast & thighs of Snooki
I don't care to wreck a guy wit rookies, but I'm literally Sprayin' Cats wit the way Pest-ah-Sides wit Pussies

Damn..

yeah...Pest had some good lines and some that could have hit hard but the follow up missed...Jack as usual had the wordplay and name flips like crazy and seemed more personal...flow would be the category I would give to pest..other then that all JACK so....

MVGT: JACK

the flow would be the only thing i would give to jack. pest won everything else for

flow-jack
punches-pest "You isnt shit-to-me, This battles his-to-ry, Putt you in mis-er-y/
Keep my spits clean like Lis-ter-ine, Then Jack Jack for the Vic-tor-y//"
mulites-pest
wordplay-pest
enjoyment-pest

that better or you want me to go even more into it.

MVGT-pest

1-1 unless jack says otherwise...
uppin for votes.

punches- pest
flow-pest
mulities-jack
enjoyment-jack
wordplay-jack

MVGT-JACK DA RIPPA

cocksucker... dont punches when battles??

2-1 Jack

Wow, Pest, your first bars were solid, but after that i felt you started focusing on multies too much. At the end of the day, multies are just one catagory man. It was a nice read none the less, just not enough consistency with the punches.

Jack, your fourth bar kinda felt weak to me, not sure if its the wording or the concept, it just doesn't read as effective as your other bars. I cant really critique any more than that to be honest, other than your lines are long as hell man, kinda throws the flow off for me. Money lol.

flow- Pest
punches-JDR
mulites- i want to say tie
wordplay- Jack

MVGT Jack

Well i see that this cats multies are off the hook and when youcan multie and punch at the same time it makes shit hit harder.. obviously i didnt do it successfully

anyways

3-1

least it aint K.O

no im just not lucky enough to get KOs anymore.

fukk this shitlets close this

lol. goodbattle man.

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