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8 barz
due 48 hours
votes to be broken down as usual,
this is my check, good luck bro

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-- Fri Apr 08, 2011 4:26 pm --

Mmmkay...

Neilz ya pimpins slippin,
Ya absent, your flow sounds different,
Your bars read like your fingers slippin,
or you typin your mommas shit-in/ (shitting)

and why the sudden image of spittin?
Is it cause your jokes ain't raunchy, a given.../
Your flow is so-so, its pissin,
But it ain't off the hinges,you should try it while sittin/

32 is faker than tin men, (ten men)
HIS bars is shoved a tin bin, covered in semen, his hand was skeetin/
But EMINEM,
Is who this fag be beggin to beat him/

whatever shit you wrote,
take it and shove it right now/
Fuckin with the "IT" factor,
You THINK you some kind of CLOWN?/

I slapped "bozos" frown upside down,
think I won't do it now?/
I'll clown diz giddy bitch till he tame,
Then slap him every time I hear the sound of my name/

How can anybody even like him, this sad lame,
He's the damn shame/
That makes the DAMN shameful,
To be mentioned with neilz name/

To battle me?
Why you even want apart of it?/
Apart from spittin dicks on weekends,
His tricks say his delivery is kinda quick/

So imma finish you,
With a rhyme that's real significant/
The first threads still open bitch,
Why lose first in round 2, just quit./

Spitting words that pinpoint with PRECISION, venemous viper spraying poison to blur up your VISION, sick FLOW capable of crippling FOES/
Get your neck twisted and SNAPPED, after you witness your bitch getting fucked and SLAPPED, illest White boy that ever RAPPED/
Injecting acid in your EYES, smartest and most WISE, it's no SURPRISE that 32's the one to shatter ur world and deliver your DEMISE/
M33, I'll minus 1 (32) and divide u by 2, leave ya full of holes wen I put the M16 to YOU, won't MISS, ain't ready for the way i K(ick) this ISH/
Uk rap gonna squash this YANKIE CHUMP, leave him red in the face like her ass wen I SPANKED HIS MUM, now he's feeling NUMB/
Ha, lyrically INCLINED, but destined never to be SIGNED, beating neilz is a mountain you never gonna CLIMB, chalk up 2 losses at the same TIME/
Flip a PENNY, flip a DIME, got skill that leaves you green with ENVY like a LIME, murderous intentions within every LINE/
M33 u shoulda RETREATED, been DEFEATED, twice in a row, so stay SEATED, before I run up in minniesota and leave you HEATED/:

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flow 32
personals 32
multies nones
creativity none
punches none


idk about yall but i think you guys could of done better b but over all good battle...

mvgt:32 as a sweep

Flow-m33
Personals-32
multies-none
Punches-32
Creativity-none

Mvgt- 32

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yo this battle was wack.... lol


nah it was allright

-vote goes to 32

the reason simply was better content

-flow- goes to -M3
-scheme-m3
personals- 32
-punches-barely any -32
-enjoyment 32


yo 32 fix your sceme, and flow will come with it.

Thankx for the feed defiance

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-- Mon Apr 11, 2011 3:01 am --

3-1
uppin for more