Hip Hop Forum

Basically the entire purpose of this crew is to work together, collab and for everyone in it to help each other improve. I'll be attempting to help others improve myself in all aspects of music.



Leeroy Jenkins
MoneyMaker
32Neilz

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If this is serious I'm in

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yo bro how many people you looking to join

All i do is audio tho. If anything

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Nice see y'all in the crew

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When you have an official roster and are ready for a forum, send me a PM with the roster and crew name.

lee im out

Yeah I don't think I can focus on this enough to keep on top of it.


in other news, i'm using this post to host my audio

All Three of you are welcome to join I.L.L

1st one- Needs more layers to be honest, the skip makes it real "hip" to listen to. Makes me feel like it'd take place in the bridge or an alternate to the ending chorus. Correct me if im wrong, but are you singing full capacity in a room? if so, my boy did the same thing, we added a couple layers of him singing not so loud and panned em to fill the space, sounded nice and full. The fade out with the voice is dope

2nd one- this one has more of a chorus feel to it, i would definitely try adding some fullness to it with layers. Although the drop in tone is a nice switch up, it felt a wee bit off. The initial drop, but maybe by adding more layers itll blend better.

3rd one- the beginning seems the same as the 2nd one, but the drop tone never happens lol. You keep it just as high, but to be honest i almost cant understand what your saying. If you were able to articulate a bit better and express the same aggression, it'd be dope. But again, it sounds rather hollow.

4th one- OK, to be honest, "i waited all my life" is all i really liked out of that pattern. Nothing horrible, this pattern just didn't stand out like the others as something with substance, kinda like filler.

All in all, 1st, like a bridge or ending chorus, 2nd, maybe with layers the tone drop wouldn't sound so harsh, more chorus oriented, 3rd one, also chorus capable but its a little hard to fully capture what your saying. The aggression in it i liked a lot though. 4th one, erno man, didn't really like anything after you said "time..." Ive been listening to your voice on repeat for like half an hour, and the one that sticks out the most is the second one for a chorus, shits stuck in my head now. Just polish up the tone drop.


UNO

I appreciate the response panda. I was actually in the midst of trying to make another chorus in between the time lol. I'm just trying to fix all the flaws and make something good. Needs polishing anyways