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5 bars 10 lines house rulz, no biting or flippin due 48hrs from now...


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-- Wed Apr 06, 2011 7:44 pm --

(he has 12 losses (right now at least), and ya that's all... bye kids)

Bennys bars is slim,
Like his chances to win/
I would drown you in calcium,
But bones can't swim/

You a 'knock off' of flesh,
that 'Fucci' bitches wouldn't even 'ad-dress'/
This battle can't even get fresh,
Cause all you flippin is mesh/

How can this "ill" emcee even lose a round?
His bars seem so 'heaven bound'/
Benny can't even choke right now,
But I guess his rhymes can't breath 6 feet in ground/

But I guess when you lose a dozen,
Your confidence on 'meek' bars even goes down/
I would tell you stick to your day job,
Because you play a good jack in the box clown/

But Benny bones is a good name for a lame,
You beggin for these battles that only put you to shame/
But I guess bones spit says it all,
Let's see slims flow die the drain/

you can hang it up now kish this battle is over/
i could give you 33 reasons why ur vocab lacks an chronic diss-order/(disorder)

one you a bitch and ya moms a hoe, two ya sisters a slut and eveybody knows/
three no one knows you thats why your pic dont show/

four your just plain gar-bage!, no really you are the... ish/
a snotty noes ish!, dirty ass ish! my lil'bitch!/(imatation sneezing)

ish!, damn.. clownin u is contagous,i might be a lil foul, but im aimin for the flagerent/
my flows ambient your a victory short from adequate/

which is the fifth reason why ur carrere is an abomination/
the twenty eight other reasons i took a ish just to make'em/('em=him)



didnt have time to structure but there u go........

-- Thu Apr 07, 2011 3:01 am --

oh yea the majority of losses i had are from no shows... wasent on here for a while so... dont take the stats for granted... even tho i can say im still a rookie at "text" battleing, im use to the real thing... so respect it, ive battled won and lost to some of the best on here... yet im still humble

"M33kish
Bennys bars is slim, Like his chances to win/
I would drown you in calcium, But bones can't swim/
lol, nice opener. But why would you drown someone in calcium in the first place? the name play is nice
You a 'knock off' of flesh, that 'Fucci' bitches wouldn't even 'ad-dress'/
This battle can't even get fresh, Cause all you flippin is mesh/
nice with the wordplay, consistent, but the set up line was harder than the punch
How can this "ill" emcee even lose a round? His bars seem so 'heaven bound'/
Benny can't even choke right now, But I guess his rhymes can't breath 6 feet in ground/
I see where you went with this bar, but it lacked proper wording.
But I guess when you lose a dozen,Your confidence on 'meek' bars even goes down/
I would tell you stick to your day job,Because you play a good jack in the box clown/
set up was nicer than the punch, so eh.....
But Benny bones is a good name for a lame, You beggin for these battles that only put you to shame/
But I guess bones spit says it all, Let's see slims flow die the drain/
nah, wasn't really feeling it man."


"Benny
you can hang it up now kish this battle is over/
i could give you 33 reasons why ur vocab lacks an chronic diss-order/(disorder)
lol, nice opener.
one you a bitch and ya moms a hoe, two ya sisters a slut and eveybody knows/
three no one knows you thats why your pic dont show/
i like how your counting the 33 reasons in order right here, taking more jabs then punches to be honest.
four your just plain gar-bage!, no really you are the... ish/
a snotty noes ish!, dirty ass ish! my lil'bitch!/(imatation sneezing)
Im rather lost at the sneezing thing, came of as stretching.
ish!, damn.. clownin u is contagous,i might be a lil foul, but im aimin for the flagerent/
my flows ambient your a victory short from adequate/
Not really feeling this one either, as it reads, it doesnt really rhyme much IMO
which is the fifth reason why ur carrere is an abomination/
the twenty eight other reasons i took a ish just to make'em/('em=him)
What are you meaning by the constant "ish"? Im not really feeling this one either."



On the opener, i definitly thought benny was taking this, but i got rather lost in his verse. I cant say i liked it much. M33k was not as hard hitting as benny's punches, but M33k was more consistant.

Flow: Tie
Punches:M33k
Multies: Tie
Wordplay: M33k
Personals: It seems benny had 3, and m33k had two, id honestly say m33ks 2 were better than bennys 3 but it doesnt matter by this point.

MVGT M33k

"oh yea the majority of losses i had are from no shows... wasent on here for a while so... dont take the stats for granted... even tho i can say im still a rookie at "text" battleing, im use to the real thing... so respect it, ive battled won and lost to some of the best on here... yet im still humble"

Seriously man?

Flow-benny
Punches-m33kish
Mulities-tie
Wordplay-m33
Personal-benny with the diss order bar

Mvgt- benny

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that last ish was me shitting lmao, all my drops are off the top so i tend to look over the sylabols, but fair enof i should start adding dashes in my flow to catch the readers... uppin

1-1

panda-
"oh yea the majority of losses i had are from no shows... wasent on here for a while so... dont take the stats for granted... even tho i can say im still a rookie at "text" battleing, im use to the real thing... so respect it, ive battled won and lost to some of the best on here... yet im still humble"

Seriously man?


what u didnt get lol, if ur talk about the part where i downed myself then said i was humble, i ment that im still gettin use this shit, i dont consider myself a pro at text battles, i do this for fun plus it gives me a different look at the art...

M33 hit all the categories a little harder so i have to go with M33...sorry for not breaking it down but his just hit harder in each cat..
MVGT: M33KISH

This was a better battle than bennys last one I voted on. M33 your verse seemed weak compared to usual, I can't pinpoint what it was, just something not quite there.
Benny you were defo on point here, can tell your new to the text battles, but I really felt your verse, not bad.
Well the breakdown:
Flow: M33, although somthing was missing, he's flow was still sharp, all over bennys in my opinion.
Punches: tie, both had good set ups and delivery.
Personals: hmm, goes to benny he had the whole bit bout m33 pic and shit, bit of research never hurts.
Nameplay: another tie, both had some, so tie on that.
Well it's a tie so imma have to call it, I'm gonna go with BB, just cos m33 was missing he's spark here.
Mvgt: benny

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2-2

Flow: Tie
Punches: M33
Multies: Tie
Wordplay: M33
Personals: M33's were better IMO. Just seemed to hit harder.

Bones, you have some ill concepts, but you just need to tweak your delivery more I think. Good battle guys.


My vote goes to M33.

Gotta go with Benny on this one

Both had great material but seemed like Benny's
just hit a little cleaner and made more sense

Flow-M33K
Multies-Benny
Punches-Benny
wordplay-tie
enjoyment-Benny

MVGT BennyBones

3-3

Flow-M
Multies-Ben
Punches-M
wordplay-M
enjoyment-M

MVGT Meek...

of course why wouldnt he vote.... lmao 4-3


uppin