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What's ya Status (Feed is Returned0

Post by TreTru »

just some other mixxtape stuff we been workin on till the nexx album drops..
Song is called Status
First Verse Tre Tru
2nd verse Petrafyne
3rd Verse reDerick James aka DJames

James gave us da beat for a chance 2 feature on da mixxtape
so here it is..unmastered..holla..

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/nah-l ... ml#p166500
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/merv- ... ml#p166501
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Damn this is hot, i was really feelin this. All of y'all went in with a good delivery and flow. Hook was alright, not great but not bad. I liked the beat, i would say to up the volume of the beat just a tad bit.

Dope shit overall my dude, keep droppin.

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Pretty tight, yo. Nice delivery, especially. Had an Old Skool ring to it, in my opinion. Hot shit, keep droppin.

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Post by Defiance »

sickkkk made man, digging your verse the most liking the island style.. feeling the vibe, sounds like a facebook song... lol


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this beat is evil dawg. hook was different. took me a minute to get into it, but sick. you got dope energy man. you could tell your confident with your lyrics. lyrics were str8 too. came in hard right out the gates. ya boy petrafyne, reminds me alot of the homeboys out here in cali. he got like that g sound to his delivery. probably could of came a lil more on point. damn the hook is sick to me now. haha. ya boy james came smoooth man. he should maybe think of some adlibs for the lil gaps between lines. would prolly pump his shit up alot. he got a tight delivery tho. he made a wild beat for real. shit is hittin. tre your quality on your parts seemed alot better out the 3. you metioned it was a rough draft tho so i wont critique it as much. dope dope track man. handclaps
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i was feeling this,i don't expect nothing less from you man keep it up.
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Not bad, I like the chorus, altho its seems like the mixing is different on each verse and chorus which was a lil wierd...Altho ur verse seems mixed best but needs to be turnd down, I like ur lyrics, thought u had the best flow out the bunch and conveyed the story well...The others were decent but were mixing a few technical things...otherwise good song...keep it up
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ayo good looks on da feedback everyone...uppin for more..
and leave links if possible so i can return da feed...1
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yeah I'm definitly feelin this track, very nicely done, really does have a cali feel. Keep doin yallz thang...i'll be on le lookout
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iuno wth my post went..... BUT.... this was illy man.... we oughta collab again bro!
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^^^
yeah i hear you on that i had at least 2 more posts in here...oh well if you need feed feed me and leave a link...uppin
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