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Re: A Hole In The Confessional Booth
Posted: Mon Apr 04, 2011 11:36 pm
by Defiance
a lil overly religious for my tastes.. but none the less
it was a good read, was feelin the 1 and 3rd verse the most, dont know how well that short of shit would translate over a beat but....
yeah good shit man, you got some skills with the pen my friend
Re: A Hole In The Confessional Booth
Posted: Wed Apr 06, 2011 12:22 am
by AfroSamuraiBlak
Nice drop man
Re: A Hole In The Confessional Booth
Posted: Wed Apr 06, 2011 2:24 am
by Audible Thought
Don't agree with your views but dope piece nonetheless
Re: A Hole In The Confessional Booth
Posted: Wed Apr 06, 2011 3:07 am
by 32neilz
Damn, this is a good piece, love religious shit man, big into church conspiricies and shit, imma write something along these lines. Good read rellik
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Re: A Hole In The Confessional Booth
Posted: Wed Apr 06, 2011 7:21 am
by Deception
Or somewhere else... I can easily prove their system fails
Point to the "stars in the dark night" & watch every 'Christian Bail'
The Reverend runs, no Adidas.. conversations starting up
Got me asking "did Tsunami victims not pray hard enough?"
nice few lines
Do ya lie? Raise em' in a world that's completely fake?
Or say... "regardless, I love you... & I'ma keep you safe"
Self esteem is played, open hands watching people pray
Collections feeds the hate, dirty hands clean the plate
Animals become dust, wilderness becomes real estate
like that there bud
nice little drop, would of prefered to see to verses tho instead of the two choruses, but i liked what i read, looking forward to your next peice.
Re: A Hole In The Confessional Booth (REVISED, READ ME!!!)
Posted: Sun Apr 10, 2011 12:49 pm
by M-Mature Boy
good stuff. to me 1st and 2nd verse were good. not a religious man but it wuz good rhymin. 1 question tho...? how wuz buddha a narcissist?
