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my flow is futuristic, critics can make like bitches and suck dicks
it's just so fucking ridiculous, i'm so unrealistically pessimistic
i'm so materialistic that if touch my shit then i'm going ballistic
skill makes me mythic chronic gets me so high that i defy physics
A killa without a conscience spewing gibberish nonsense
to be honest i'm the fucking bomb bitch that's just being modest
I promise to pay homage and drop knowledge
something like this happens when planets collide
when mortal enemies decide to put their differences aside
when i realize it's time to ride, when i blow up no one survives
when the general demands that you destroy your lives
as the beat commences i beat common sense into the innocents
drop your defenses the suspense is damn near offensive
drop kick the door of the door hinges while sitting on 24 inches
by the way i found something that rhymes with oranges
i blow up and come spitting multi's out my ass
game slipping out ya hands like a faulty pass
slapping a bitches ass, damn she's a naughty lass

this was multilicious bro...lol..respect...crazy too..lol

Whoa wtf.... that's shits slick, I was sleeping on you fam...

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yeah i just went hard as possible on this shit lol

Pretty Dope Shit bro...
Some of the Multies coulda been more of a multie but still... good content.
7.5/10

I cut rappers off like unwanted PHONE CALLS, breaking through their FOAM STALLS, my TONE a CYCLONE to get APPLAUSE/ everytime I touch the mic, it's REAL RAP, feel the STEEL CLAP, the mics automatic- I PEEL CAPS, ain't ready for how 32NEILZ YAPS/ lyricists get smashed like SHEETS of GLASS, you know 32 COMPETES FAST, rap 101, neilz'll teach a NEAT CLASS, words are weapons, feel the HEAT BLAST/  

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yo there were multi syllable rhymes here and there.. good shit tho man
not quite what i was expecting tho... but a good read non the less

This was alright. I wouldnt go as far as sayin multies out the ass since only a couple were more than two syllable rhyme schemes. Was decent but cud def get beefed up more with longer rhyme schemes and more complex vocab.

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Nice for the feedback people

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