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-- Thu Mar 31, 2011 9:19 pm --

Young man ain't it past your bedtime, your flow weak, like you pissed in the bed for the last time.

You too young money, I spit on whatever 2 cents you throw in, big bank takes little bank, makes sense?... dummy,

Cause I know you young, dumb and full of cum, probably sniff paint and think its fun, but I ain't letting money walk till my full grown bull shit is done,

And how does it feel to ball on a budget? A 14 year old rapper, sounds funny to you 2 doesn't it?

But I guess I had pipe dreams too, but they all done, because the last 1 was boning your mom in the asshole, but out popped you,

She never told you that your fathers this handsome? Thats kinda sad though, 'cause you look like what came out my old moneys asshole,

The only money you see, is probably off of B.E.T., too much 'credit;? You're right its probably off 'EBT',

Money ain't never made 1 'buck', I bust 8 shots at this broke bastard, bankrupt...

You told me that your mother was good in bed/
well she wasnt so imma put this AK to her head/
You better watch yourself cause im osama/
And ur gonna be the next gonner/
Fucking with me is like fucking your girl/
Bad and total not worth it/
Imma pimp ur sister/
Like a curling iron/
Your gonna get scratch like an itch/
But all u are is a little bitch/
Your name makes no sense/
Like 50 cent/
you run a candy shop/
Pretening to be a fat cop/
Ill hit u with a sledge hammer to the head/
Then make a nice bed for you in hell/

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Young man ain't it past your bedtime, your flow weak, like you pissed in the bed for the last time.
hahaha that shit was tight

You too young money, I spit on whatever 2 cents you throw in, big bank takes little bank, makes sense?... dummy,
good play on the name, but the makes sense shit is hella over playe buddy

Cause I know you young, dumb and full of cum, probably sniff paint and think its fun, but I ain't letting money walk till my full grown bull shit is done,
coulda came harder...


And how does it feel to ball on a budget? A 14 year old rapper, sounds funny to you 2 doesn't it?
bow wow was 14 when he was big... notta hard punch

But I guess I had pipe dreams too, but they all done, because the last 1 was boning your mom in the asshole, but out popped you,
so so

She never told you that your fathers this handsome? Thats kinda sad though, 'cause you look like what came out my old moneys asshole,
weak... come harder man..

The only money you see, is probably off of B.E.T., too much 'credit;? You're right its probably off 'EBT',
THATS WHAT IM FUKKIN TALKIN BOUT!! Thats fire son!

Money ain't never made 1 'buck', I bust 8 shots at this broke bastard, bankrupt...
good closer...

Man i know you got it in you to rip mih fikkas head off man... You just gotta structure it and get more creative with it...


Money

You told me that your mother was good in bed/
well she wasnt so imma put this AK to her head/
weak
You better watch yourself cause im osama/
And ur gonna be the next gonner/
gay
Fucking with me is like fucking your girl/
Bad and total not worth it/
you wanna rhyme man? okay punch if it'd rhyme...
Imma pimp ur sister/
Like a curling iron/
how do you pimp a curling iron?
Your gonna get scratch like an itch/
But all u are is a little bitch/
hey you rhymed... The bar was gay but you rhymed...
Your name makes no sense/
Like 50 cent/
man i really dont even wanna read the rest...
you run a candy shop/
Pretening to be a fat cop/
somebody slap this kid....
Ill hit u with a sledge hammer to the head/
Then make a nice bed for you in hell/
....

Man this shit was One sided....

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M33K

Not much to comment on battle wise..this was a slaughter...even though M33 came weaker then he should he took this hands down in every category so I'll just give M33 some pointers...you had one fantastic line and a couple decent lines...try to push your rhyme words so you can form better punches...the B.E.T. was awesome and the opener..the last line was decent closer and the 2nd line was solid but pest was right about it being played how you ended that line...good shit overall M33...just don't settle for filler...make every line a set up then punch...you got it in ya

I gotta say M33k91 has my vote
he came cleaner with Punches

3-0 props money better luck next time cuzzin.

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M33 win's KO.

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