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5 bars (10 lines) crew embers can vote on this..due today..judge on personals,punches,flow,wordplay,multies...

-- Thu Mar 31, 2011 4:36 am --

no flipping

-- Thu Mar 31, 2011 5:28 am --

I'm about to "solve" this simple JIGsaw puzzle.
Then "take'em apart" piece by piece,no need for muscle.
Put him in a "box" when I'm done "playing games."
He JIGGLEZ when he walks..not just a play on his name.
This Santa Claus stunt double's sweeter then a candy cane.
I'll snap this gingerbread man with my hands,he's lame.
You're mother nature's holliday gift from me
"Wrap" you up and put you "under" the Christmas trees.
I'll take a jig-saw to jigz-jaw and roll'em like a rickshaw.
Come ill with my sick jaw and steal the win like a pick off.

I'm the true soul stealer, bury your body 6 feet deep
destroying the reaper, now even the dead can't creep

Yo grimm where's billy and mandy, I heard you dig little kids
That's some fucked up shit that both the law and the lord forbids

Not even the seasons fear the reaper so why should I
It's true i suck i'll drain your lyrics till they're bone dry

Grimm i gotta ask do you have a brother who likes to tell tales
'cause i think you're an undercover man lover who just likes males

I'm a beast like Iron Man I'll make your day dark and grim
the crew is my suit but with out me there's no tony stark in them

Jigglez you gettin better but it needs to be about your opponent in every line.

Flow-jiggz
Punches-grimm
Wordplay-grimm
Multies-grimm
Personals-grimm

But Jigglez you gettin better.

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2-0 ME SO FAR

Flow- J, just all around better structure. Grimms not that bad off though.

Punches-G, he came more direct with name flips and insults.

Wordplay- G, the wordplay on this was nice and original: ""Wrap" you up and put you "under" the
Christmas"trees.

Multies- G, he came a little more elevated. Both were rather solid to be honest.

Personals- G, he was more consistant with the name flips and what not, but J honestly your last bar is fucking solid, being in the same crew and all, with the wordplay support. NICE


MVGT Grimm.

3-0 ME...good battle jigz...getting better quick

Thread closed and records updated.

Grimm wins KO.