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Immortal Platinum *Vs* Pest
Posted: Wed Mar 30, 2011 7:47 am
by Immortal Jav
4 bars
Due Date: thursday
Check...
house rules
-Break down Ya votes-
Re: Immortal Platinum *Vs* Pest
Posted: Wed Mar 30, 2011 12:41 pm
by pest
can we make it due by friday?
my minds not right at the moment and im not tyna give you an easy victory.
Re: Immortal Platinum *Vs* Pest
Posted: Wed Mar 30, 2011 9:47 pm
by Immortal Jav
aight friday..
Re: Immortal Platinum *Vs* Pest
Posted: Sat Apr 02, 2011 5:38 am
by pest
try my hardest to drop today. gotta lotta shita do and two verses to write...
Re: Immortal Platinum *Vs* Pest
Posted: Sat Apr 02, 2011 6:47 am
by Immortal Jav
no prob. i might have to drop saturday anyways
Re: Immortal Platinum *Vs* Pest
Posted: Sat Apr 02, 2011 10:46 am
by pest
Just tryna get it outta the way...
i'll throw out your 'lungs' before you can catch a 'breath'/
fuck a 'paragraph', i'll finish this line to predict i've 'sentenced' death//
Homie i'll take your shine, Like im a black hole making the sun crash/
Cuz the only way ya '(w)raps dope', if they was 'written' onna 'Blunt Wraps'//
Somebody call 'Jack Malone' Ima Murder this Cat 'Without a trace'/
cuz ur bars are 'quick to disappear' like 'cell phones' in 'subways!'//
How could "Death" Your "Your Subject", You needa plead the fifth/
You a "Cannibal Activist"... Doggy... "Eat A Dick"//
Re: Immortal Platinum *Vs* Pest
Posted: Sat Apr 02, 2011 11:01 am
by Immortal Jav
Ayo..
This pest should be Re-enforced,
I can't fiddle with A Hobo that's Poor
*He's A pest like the One's On ELIZABETH TAYLOR'S CORPSE*!!
*I Told this pest To Backdown Quick*
you think ya big, you a white man in a black Backround Like Ya SIG!!
I Told Ya Not to mess With the King
not even PEST CONROL would want a HOLD on this kid
*without Estimating On how much pest spray they must Bring*!!
Peep this kid video, are you on crack? Now he's trying Racial slurs
Cuz now He thinks He's black!!
i told ya you was facing Ya TERMINATION, He said
He was a force Greater - Till i reported Him to billy the exterminator!!
My rhymes are the Force that's Major
i fleet this pest like he was hiding under My refrigerator!!
Expo's: Billy the Exterminator is an Exterminator on TV
Re: Immortal Platinum *Vs* Pest
Posted: Sat Apr 02, 2011 11:05 am
by pest
fukkin dammit...
that was hard bro...
Uppin for votes.
Re: Immortal Platinum *Vs* Pest (Needs Votes Now)
Posted: Sat Apr 02, 2011 12:31 pm
by Immortal Jav
We Need Votes NOW!!
Re: Immortal Platinum *Vs* Pest
Posted: Sat Apr 02, 2011 2:40 pm
by pest
Votes here... Getcha votes here
Re: Immortal Platinum *Vs* Pest
Posted: Sat Apr 02, 2011 4:07 pm
by Kuhlerblynd
I have a problem with voting on this battle, because it seems Immortal wrote twice as many bars as Pest did... Makes it seem like an unfair advantage...
Re: Immortal Platinum *Vs* Pest
Posted: Sat Apr 02, 2011 4:23 pm
by Chad
damn! dude pest went hard. real nice punches especially the 3rd bar. vote=Pest
Re: Immortal Platinum *Vs* Pest
Posted: Sat Apr 02, 2011 4:44 pm
by pest
fukk it murk vote anyways...
and chad explain your vote man...
still 0-0
Re: Immortal Platinum *Vs* Pest
Posted: Sat Apr 02, 2011 5:03 pm
by Chad
yeah u had more punches and metaphors. ur word play wuz more clever than immortal plats. plat's wordplay seemed alittle too simple and jus not enough punches in my opinion. my vote goes to Pest
Re: Immortal Platinum *Vs* Pest
Posted: Sat Apr 02, 2011 5:08 pm
by Kuhlerblynd
CHAD's vote doesnt count. He doesnt have the required post count to vote on this battle.