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3 bars, house rules, no bullshit/crew votes, no recycling/biting

Let's get it, this is my check...

fukk this shit...
gettin it outta the way...


yo...


Ima 'EAT' This bitch up, grab 'ITALIAN BRED' and ima 'ROAST BEEF'/
Serve Him the 'FOOT-LONG' for 'FIVE DOLLARS', Then turn him a 'VEGGIE' like 'NO MEAT'//

You couldnt 'MURK SHIT' if your 'FLOW' brought a 'FISH TO THE SURFACE'/
Your 'WORTHLESS' at 'KEEPIN SHIT HOT' Like you styles a 'BROKEN THERMOUS'//

I 'SPIT FLAMES' in the 'THIRD DEGREE', This 'HOT' Shit and i 'BURN HIM BADLY'/
Beat me? Usin 'JERGINS' to 'MURDER SPERM' Is how you 'MURK EM NASTY'//

-- Tue Apr 05, 2011 12:50 am --

all im doimg... uppin ur verse.

Aight man, you only did three bars, so Im just going to match yours so we can get this show on the road...

Ayo... You met the Wordplay Messiah duke? Lol...

Why do it seem your chest wants to harbor~some~slugs? Man, just~cause
Pest think he so 'fly' and high creating a 'buzz'?, Im the swatter~of~bugs!!!

Just being honest~,you~suck! Im like pest control, confess-it-bitch
'Claim your Ill and sick', shit I wouldn't take you seriously if you were 'pestilence'!!!
http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/pestilence

I'll wreck-your-shit, like 'windshields on highways', 'guts splattered~on~screen'
Murk's so 'fly', Im the type to 'raid' ya nightmares just to shatter-ya-dreams!!!

o.k. both had some good multies so i'll go tie...Murk had more plays on pest's name...both had some real good lines.....both had good flow
Pest:
Ima 'EAT' This bitch up, grab 'ITALIAN BRED' and ima 'ROAST BEEF'/
Serve Him the 'FOOT-LONG' for 'FIVE DOLLARS', Then turn him a 'VEGGIE' like 'NO MEAT'//
MY FAV LINE FROM YOU...good shit
Murk:
Why do it seem your chest wants to harbor~some~slugs? Man, just~cause
Pest think he so 'fly' and high creating a 'buzz'?, Im the swatter~of~bugs!!!
Nice shit murk...

Overall I'd go with MURK....his closer was better for me..
Murk wins

that was fire murk...
1-0 him upiin votes.

Ima 'EAT' This bitch up, grab 'ITALIAN BRED' and ima 'ROAST BEEF'/
Serve Him the 'FOOT-LONG' for 'FIVE DOLLARS', Then turn him a 'VEGGIE' like 'NO MEAT'//

the concept was good but the execution was a little bit corny. Okay line though

You couldnt 'MURK SHIT' if your 'FLOW' brought a 'FISH TO THE SURFACE'/
Your 'WORTHLESS' at 'KEEPIN SHIT HOT' Like you styles a 'BROKEN THERMOUS'//

Wasn't really feeling it at all

I 'SPIT FLAMES' in the 'THIRD DEGREE', This 'HOT' Shit and i 'BURN HIM BADLY'/
Beat me? Usin 'JERGINS' to 'MURDER SPERM' Is how you 'MURK EM NASTY'//

Pretty much any sperm line in text battles just makes me turn the other cheek. It's all old







Why do it seem your chest wants to harbor~some~slugs? Man, just~cause
Pest think he so 'fly' and high creating a 'buzz'?, Im the swatter~of~bugs!!!

Another okay concept that couldve been executed better.

Just being honest~,you~suck! Im like pest control, confess-it-bitch
'Claim your Ill and sick', shit I wouldn't take you seriously if you were 'pestilence'!!!

this was okay

I'll wreck-your-shit, like 'windshields on highways', 'guts splattered~on~screen'
Murk's so 'fly', Im the type to 'raid' ya nightmares just to shatter-ya-dreams!!!

last line kinda fell off all together




Overall I think if murk's last bar was as solid as the first 2, he would've had this just based on being more consistent than his opponent, but Pest still had what I thought was the best bar of the battle out of the turn him into a veggie line. This was close but jusssst enough for me to go the other way

Vote - Pest

i Been smokin hella weed...
1-1 uppin...

I think you mean I have 2 battles....I have 67 posts...now 68

flow pest
multies murk
deliverence murk
punch tie

mvgt- murk

close battle.... was hard for me to catch the flow of both but was a good battle good job bros

2-1 can we get some votes yall?

Was quite even. I liked Pest's 1st bar, or I would've if he didn't include the footlong for 5 dollars part. It was like it was thrown in there cause it HAD to be and not cause it benefited the punch. It's like yeah ur talking about Subway we figured that out without mentioning the footlong deal so now it just looks forced. 2nd bar was meh 3rd bar was even more meh nothing stung to me.

Murk if ur 1st bar didn't tie fly and buzz together I'd probably swat u for making a 'fly' wordplay but since his name is Pest and u spiced up the metaphor I'll say that's a good opener. 2nd bar was alright but didn't hit hard to me cause I had to look up the definition. Ok wordplay in the last bar but it would look cooler in a written than a battle, it's just that style of punch.

I'm gonna vote for Murk cause his bars were a little bit better. Their openers were their best bars and Murk's was better. Pretty close one though good shit.

iight...
3-1 Murk..
one more for theT.K.O?

Flow- murk
Wordplay- murk
Nameflips- pest
Punches- tie
Creativity- pest

Mvgt- Murk

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tko... good shit murk

Yeah Pest, nice battle. We should do it again sometime...

Records updated and thread closed.

Murk wins TKO.