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I did this to the ALL I NEED instrumental by method man and mary j blige...wrote this for my girl.....mason rae..she did a cameo

CHORUS:X2
Before I met you I was wasted space.
I felt there was no way of saving face.
Now through the church of love I’m gaining faith.
You’re my song on Sunday..my amazing grace

verse 1:
It was raining outside, in walked the sunshine.
A pretty young thing, had me fumbling dumb lines.
Stuttering and mumbling,damn she was so fine.
A diamond class lover this girl is a gold mine.
Those were my thoughts as she passed and smiled.
I wondered if this love would last a while..
Damn…those aren’t thoughts a single man should have.
Most of us are like..“man when can I tap that ass?”
But,really,when i sit back and examine the facts.
She filled my heart’s void and prevented collapse.
Kept my mind running like Flo Jo on tracks.
She had a body like a big-mac baby was “stacked.”
Beautiful, intelligent, and sexy as hell.
Makes other women irrelevant..Alexi to Zell. (A to Z)
I’m imprisoned by love.I’m in the “ecstacy cell”
I’m deep in a trance in which I instantly fell.
It seems as if the clouds just drifted away.
She’s my angel of love that lifted my faith.
Now there’s nothing but blue skies.No shades of grey.
She’s my song on Sunday..my “Amazing Grace”

CHORUS:X2

VERSE 2:
She can handle life and support herself.
But she ain’t gotta do a thing with her gorgeous self.
Perfect complexion..eyes like stars.
Inner-planetary love affair..Venus and Mars
When our worlds collide our bodies bend like bars..
Intertwined with passion..motors reving like cars.
Why dream of a genie when I’ve got my wish.
Love confirmed with a hug and sealed with a kiss
Life with her is luxury, she’s eternal bliss.
She’s in my mind all the “time” like a watch on my wrist.

PRE-BRIDGE INTERLUDE:
I once was lost but now I’m found.
I had my head in the clouds..You pulled my feet to the ground.
I once was blind but now I see
And I’m so happy it’s you who’s in front of me.

CAMEO BY MASONRAE:
glad to give u sum inspiration,
just knoww, ill never leave u in isolation.
Imma be careful with you as if this spark is on probation.
Both live to fight the dark temptations. Battle our frustrations..
so we gunna come together..and Shake this nation.
Rock the basement. The underground, cuz were on top saying it with exclamation
Determined to master our ways of admiration.


BRIDGE:
You are my Amazing grace..
Baby girl, you’re my a-mazing grace.
Amazing face and amazing waist
Baby girl you’re my a-mazing grace.
You are my Amazing grace
Baby girl, you’re my a-mazing grace.
Amazing face and amazing waist
Baby girl, you’re my a-mazing grace.

CHORUS:X1

good shit bro. basic but sometimes songs that are directed to girls tend to be basic. i bet it flows perfectly with the meth beat

yea def. would be hot if it were on a track, i hate reading songs lol but this one is catchy

its dope,catchy,entertaining

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catchy i like! put this on track and it will prolly sound better than reading. lol its good

Good shit bro...I actually did something to the same beat a couple yrs ago for my ex...yours turned out much much better though lol..lemme known when its recorded

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Why dream of a genie when I’ve got my wish.
and

She’s in my mind all the “time” like a watch on my wrist.
were my favorite lines, great post bro.

This shit is raw trust me it goes perfect to the beat. Trust anyone else who knows flow and how to flow can see it. Written well even bars. Visuals and metaphors were nice.. then general public would appreciate it. ur production better be on point tho ...audio engineers singers vocals etc...